Old 12-10-2006, 19:55   #1 (permalink)
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Need feed back

http://www.exitlabs.com/

I Updated the website ..

***Portfolio is done and updated

***and i will work on the shadow as well

***Shadow updated now ..

Thank you

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Old 12-10-2006, 20:27   #2 (permalink)
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You tease. It looks very cool. Informative. But I want the links to go somewhere so I can see your stuff. I didn't like how the text has no punctuation, but that could just be my own pet peeve. I love the jumpin guy.
Good job.
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Old 12-10-2006, 20:33   #3 (permalink)
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the jumping guy is me

and i will complete the other pages soon

thank you for your reply
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Old 13-10-2006, 02:08   #4 (permalink)
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wouldnt the shadow change size as he hovers?
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Old 13-10-2006, 04:09   #5 (permalink)
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On the side menu you need more leading as 'skills' encroaches on 'about me'. Also the text may be a bit small.

P.S. Under Construction. (No S)
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Old 13-10-2006, 04:48   #6 (permalink)
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Not sure about the hovering effect. As Andy says, shadow size and opacity should change to make it more realistic. Also saying 'What Can I Do To You' makes you sound like an escort
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Old 13-10-2006, 05:39   #7 (permalink)
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Don't like the header font.
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Old 13-10-2006, 10:54   #8 (permalink)
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Thank you for all your comments

i guess your all right about the shadow ..

please revisit the site because i updated it now ..

http://www.exitlabs.com

about the logo font i was trying to find a good font but didn't really find what am looking for
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Old 13-10-2006, 11:01   #9 (permalink)
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That website just screams 'MASSIVE EGO' at me.
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Old 13-10-2006, 12:20   #10 (permalink)
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That website just screams 'MASSIVE EGO' at me.
That and it feels inspired by the massive ego on display over at www.billybussey.com

I don't think he's updated his site since the first time I saw in back in 2002 or so.

Of course, he has the software skills.
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Old 13-10-2006, 12:34   #11 (permalink)
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man the website is amazing .. waaw

thank you for sharing ..

about the EGO part

EGO is an inflated feeling of pride in your superiority to others .. Definitions Source

i'm not like that am a nice person .. just designing a personal website !!

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That and it feels inspired by the massive ego on display over at www.billybussey.com

I don't think he's updated his site since the first time I saw in back in 2002 or so.

Of course, he has the software skills.
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Old 13-10-2006, 12:40   #12 (permalink)
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Of course, he has the software skills.

No shit! That's some seriously impressive flash/3D work - makes me a bit envious.
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Old 13-10-2006, 12:53   #13 (permalink)
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if you like flash .. then check this site out

http://okaydave.com/

or simply this

http://www.hansthedouble.com/

or

http://www.charlies.co.nz/

3D here

http://www.artworksgroup.net/english/index.asp\

Enjoy

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Old 13-10-2006, 13:04   #14 (permalink)
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I noticed some English syntax/meaning errors. I may be wrong (I'm not a native speaker):
What can I do to you ->What can I do for you? / What I can do for you.
Same for: What can I offer you today -> What I can offer you today:
under constructions -> under construction
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Old 13-10-2006, 13:15   #15 (permalink)
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FIXED

THANK YOU

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I noticed some English syntax/meaning errors. I may be wrong (I'm not a native speaker):
What can I do to you ->What can I do for you? / What I can do for you.
Same for: What can I offer you today -> What I can offer you today:
under constructions -> under construction
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Old 13-10-2006, 13:20   #16 (permalink)
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Hmmm...

I think your typeface choices are creating an 'identity' crisis for your site. The direction is a bit confused. It's a little 'sci-fi' but logo doesn't quite match the theme.

All that being said, I found myself mesmerized by the floating man animation. I'm not sure what it means in relation to your site (if anything) but it is definately an 'attention' grabber.

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Old 13-10-2006, 13:29   #17 (permalink)
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Thank you for passing by and taking the time to review the site, your comments are very respected and will be considered ..

about the logo --> am still working on it ..

about the floating man this is me and am putting that animation to share few skills in flash

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Hmmm...

I think your typeface choices are creating an 'identity' crisis for your site. The direction is a bit confused. It's a little 'sci-fi' but logo doesn't quite match the theme.

All that being said, I found myself mesmerized by the floating man animation. I'm not sure what it means in relation to your site (if anything) but it is definately an 'attention' grabber.

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Old 13-10-2006, 13:35   #18 (permalink)
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The floaty you would look a lot slicker with some easing. It's a bit jerky at the moment.
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Old 13-10-2006, 15:22   #19 (permalink)
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Old 13-10-2006, 18:31   #20 (permalink)
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I like the initial feel, but personally too much text and set to small.
Reminds me of mine, but been way too busy to update it for about 4 years.

http://www.TheBrits.com/folio
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