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Alexanda · 10-10-2006, 13:30

is this any good? it's a cover for an a4 booklet. Ignore the type and shit yet as it's only a rough (i know not everyone will get it).
Going to remove it again soon.

pat · 10-10-2006, 13:40

I think it'll look a lot better in print, but it looks fine yeah. Soemthing about the technical words, they feel a bit squashed, leading feels bit tight, dunno.

adras · 10-10-2006, 13:55

I like, it looks very graphical and precise plus the circular graphic represents the dentist's head lamp in a way.

cocknose · 10-10-2006, 14:14

alright mate.. well there is nothing much to crit. Its cleans, i like the geometry... whats with the EM dash?... you need to sort out your margins but i'm sure your aware. I like it ... would be interested in how you where thinkin about getting it printed!
Not sure about the colour scheme.

Yes.. its not an em dash... i am a numpty

Alexanda · 10-10-2006, 14:24

its not an em it's an underscore, the colours were requested by the client. Just sorting the margins out. Pat your right about the leading but i've not sorted the type out yet.

cocknose · 10-10-2006, 14:34

why is there an underscore?

Alexanda · 10-10-2006, 14:48

so your eyes are guided from castle to referral guide

cocknose · 10-10-2006, 15:10

shouldn't it be an en dash?.... to lead the eye?.. I am probably completely wrong as my knowledge of hyphenation and space filling is limited.

cocknose · 10-10-2006, 15:11

shouldn't it be an en dash?.... to lead the eye?.. I am probably completely wrong as my knowledge of hyphenation is limited.

Alexanda · 10-10-2006, 16:44

Scott · 10-10-2006, 17:46

aw i missed it

Andy · 10-10-2006, 17:47

too late, shoot.

10-10-2006, 13:30	#1 (permalink)
Alexanda European Champions 2008 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 2,305	quick question is this any good? it's a cover for an a4 booklet. Ignore the type and shit yet as it's only a rough (i know not everyone will get it). Going to remove it again soon. __________________ whats facebook? Last edited by Alexanda : 10-10-2006 at 14:09.

10-10-2006, 13:40	#2 (permalink)
pat jorge regula Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: B'ham/Leeds Posts: 4,813	I think it'll look a lot better in print, but it looks fine yeah. Soemthing about the technical words, they feel a bit squashed, leading feels bit tight, dunno. __________________

10-10-2006, 13:55	#3 (permalink)
adras Zły Join Date: May 2004 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 1,920	I like, it looks very graphical and precise plus the circular graphic represents the dentist's head lamp in a way. __________________ Be Crisp (tm)

10-10-2006, 14:14	#4 (permalink)
cocknose Banned™ Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 3,219	alright mate.. well there is nothing much to crit. Its cleans, i like the geometry... whats with the EM dash?... you need to sort out your margins but i'm sure your aware. I like it ... would be interested in how you where thinkin about getting it printed! Not sure about the colour scheme. Yes.. its not an em dash... i am a numpty __________________ Facebook me! Last edited by cocknose : 10-10-2006 at 15:03.

10-10-2006, 14:24	#5 (permalink)
Alexanda European Champions 2008 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 2,305	its not an em it's an underscore, the colours were requested by the client. Just sorting the margins out. Pat your right about the leading but i've not sorted the type out yet. __________________ whats facebook?

10-10-2006, 14:34	#6 (permalink)
cocknose Banned™ Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 3,219	why is there an underscore? __________________ Facebook me!

10-10-2006, 14:48	#7 (permalink)
Alexanda European Champions 2008 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 2,305	so your eyes are guided from castle to referral guide __________________ whats facebook?

10-10-2006, 15:10	#8 (permalink)
cocknose Banned™ Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 3,219	shouldn't it be an en dash?.... to lead the eye?.. I am probably completely wrong as my knowledge of hyphenation and space filling is limited. __________________ Facebook me!

10-10-2006, 15:11	#9 (permalink)
cocknose Banned™ Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 3,219	shouldn't it be an en dash?.... to lead the eye?.. I am probably completely wrong as my knowledge of hyphenation is limited. __________________ Facebook me!

10-10-2006, 16:44	#10 (permalink)
Alexanda European Champions 2008 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 2,305	nope __________________ whats facebook?

10-10-2006, 17:46	#11 (permalink)
Scott sanddancer Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: South Shields Posts: 2,881	aw i missed it

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Andy liquid cosh Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: leeds/brighton Posts: 2,789	too late, shoot. __________________ portfolio or flickr or dt on flickr

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