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5P4C3 · 09-10-2006, 07:01

Just finished my portfolio. Pleace tell me what you think

emil · 09-10-2006, 07:47

Excellent

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Dusteh · 09-10-2006, 07:50

It shows nothing... the portfolio section is really uninspiring. Like the blue though.

5P4C3 · 09-10-2006, 08:12

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It shows nothing... the portfolio section is really uninspiring. Like the blue though.

Any tips to what I can do to make it more inspiring?

Accurate · 09-10-2006, 08:12

not for me

5P4C3 · 09-10-2006, 08:18

what do you mean Accurate?:P

Megaton Cat · 09-10-2006, 11:30

Ditch the spalshscreen and annoying popup. It really serves no kind of purpose.

-_'

5P4C3 · 09-10-2006, 15:25

Okei, Ill ditch the pop up window cause that really seems to piss everyone off. I dont really like Contacts form, but if you really think that is nessesery I'll add one.

The "emo" photos will stay though

"At the moment it looks like you can't, or can't be bothered."

hmm?

5P4C3 · 10-10-2006, 05:33

There I've removed the splash page and the pop up. I also created a mail form.

Improvement?

PS · 11-10-2006, 13:31

interesting design, you have a very unique style and is kinda refreshing, a few bugs ive noticed are.. the white background stretches to the top in IE, and on your contact page would be good to see a back link if someone clicks submit without entering data.

i3lance · 11-10-2006, 13:50

Not really my kind of design at all really since your asking for feedback. The text seems real small, the workspace seems even smaller and the myriad of faces "clockwork orange look" offset with the blue is just wrong on the eye.

Sorry definetely not my thing. However full credit for adding the contact form. Most people who know how to use a PC disable email linkage from pages or sites with their programs. There are interesting stats on stuff like that too...

adras · 11-10-2006, 16:07

If you have to explain to the user what to do at the portfolio section, then it is not a good sign. I like you work though. Why did you confined yourself in a such small space for your portfolio site?

You can fit everthing: about/contact/portfolio on those one page folio pages, you should look into that.

5P4C3 · 12-10-2006, 06:09

Hm I did not check out for bugs in IE so thanks for telling me! I'll check into that and I will make a back button.

I've checked out a lot of 1 page sites, and I've liked most of them. But I choose to do it the way I've done because I do not really have that much work to show of yet, that also explains the small space.

Any idea to something else I could put in the background instead of the faces? I tried plain white, but that did not turn out well.

emil · 12-10-2006, 06:11

I still can't see it in FF 1.507 PC XP SP2. Sigh...

5P4C3 · 12-10-2006, 06:46

What do you mean you cant see it? the page wont show? CauseI use FF an PC with xp to.

emil · 12-10-2006, 06:48

It must be my end, then...
I get this

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An appropriate representation of the requested resource /portfolio/ could not be found on this server.

Apache/1.3.37 Server at artisfraud.com Port 80

I'll try from home, as well.

5P4C3 · 12-10-2006, 08:11

Try this

direct link.

emil · 12-10-2006, 08:17

Nope, Flock either.
But it works in IE and Opera, so it must be my end.

5P4C3 · 17-10-2006, 13:49

Well I've fixed the IE bug, and I added a back link to the contact-form.

Daniel Diggle · 17-10-2006, 14:15

Im not keen on it personally

09-10-2006, 07:01	#1 (permalink)
5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	New Portoflio Just finished my portfolio. Pleace tell me what you think PRESS THIS

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Accurate Accurate Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: UK Posts: 1,168	not for me __________________ decent web hosting - www.balue.com

09-10-2006, 15:25	#8 (permalink)
5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	je Okei, Ill ditch the pop up window cause that really seems to piss everyone off. I dont really like Contacts form, but if you really think that is nessesery I'll add one. The "emo" photos will stay though "At the moment it looks like you can't, or can't be bothered." hmm?

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adras Zły Join Date: May 2004 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 1,921	If you have to explain to the user what to do at the portfolio section, then it is not a good sign. I like you work though. Why did you confined yourself in a such small space for your portfolio site? You can fit everthing: about/contact/portfolio on those one page folio pages, you should look into that. __________________ Be Crisp (tm)

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09-10-2006, 07:50	#3 (permalink)
Dusteh Sir digby chicken caesar Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 4,407	It shows nothing... the portfolio section is really uninspiring. Like the blue though.

09-10-2006, 08:18	#6 (permalink)
5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	what do you mean Accurate?:P

09-10-2006, 11:30	#7 (permalink)
Megaton Cat bellow average poster Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 559	Ditch the spalshscreen and annoying popup. It really serves no kind of purpose. -_'

10-10-2006, 05:33	#9 (permalink)
5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	There I've removed the splash page and the pop up. I also created a mail form. Improvement?

11-10-2006, 13:31	#10 (permalink)
PS Skubala happens Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Midlands Posts: 55	interesting design, you have a very unique style and is kinda refreshing, a few bugs ive noticed are.. the white background stretches to the top in IE, and on your contact page would be good to see a back link if someone clicks submit without entering data.

11-10-2006, 13:50	#11 (permalink)
i3lance Read between da lines! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: UK, former Londoner Posts: 843	Not really my kind of design at all really since your asking for feedback. The text seems real small, the workspace seems even smaller and the myriad of faces "clockwork orange look" offset with the blue is just wrong on the eye. Sorry definetely not my thing. However full credit for adding the contact form. Most people who know how to use a PC disable email linkage from pages or sites with their programs. There are interesting stats on stuff like that too...

12-10-2006, 06:09	#13 (permalink)
5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	Hm I did not check out for bugs in IE so thanks for telling me! I'll check into that and I will make a back button. I've checked out a lot of 1 page sites, and I've liked most of them. But I choose to do it the way I've done because I do not really have that much work to show of yet, that also explains the small space. Any idea to something else I could put in the background instead of the faces? I tried plain white, but that did not turn out well.

12-10-2006, 06:11	#14 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 6,834	I still can't see it in FF 1.507 PC XP SP2. Sigh...

12-10-2006, 06:46	#15 (permalink)
5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	What do you mean you cant see it? the page wont show? CauseI use FF an PC with xp to.

12-10-2006, 08:11	#17 (permalink)
5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	Try this direct link.

12-10-2006, 08:17	#18 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 6,834	Nope, Flock either. But it works in IE and Opera, so it must be my end.

17-10-2006, 13:49	#19 (permalink)
5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	Well I've fixed the IE bug, and I added a back link to the contact-form.

17-10-2006, 14:15	#20 (permalink)
Daniel Diggle oh dear me™ Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: UK, London Posts: 117	Im not keen on it personally

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