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detox · 01-10-2006, 08:58

Comments welcome.

Scott · 01-10-2006, 09:00

I like, as with the rest of them, good work mate, well done.

SeanMedia · 01-10-2006, 11:11

very nice. have you thought about having the cityscape in black coming out of the top? try that - might look better than being cut out of the bottom.

i3lance · 01-10-2006, 14:56

Good job. I can't fault it.

poppinphresh · 01-10-2006, 17:59

I really like it, great work.

cocknose · 01-10-2006, 18:11

nah.. don't like it, looks disjointed, to much conflict between the positive and negative space...
you'v got bits poppin out when it should be flat, you have clean areas where there should be dust.
Looks rushed with no reflection(reflection of thought that is)...

detox · 01-10-2006, 19:27

Quote:

Originally Posted by cocknose

Looks rushed with no reflection(reflection of thought that is)...

LOL well gee, sorry you feel this way. Not the case.

Megaton Cat · 01-10-2006, 22:20

To be honest, I couldn't instantly distingish the cityscape at the bottom. Looked like a blob to me. I think it would look awsome at the top.

Nice overall.

Colin-uk · 02-10-2006, 05:08

I think it would look better if the actual landscape (building shapes) were black and the 'splash' was another colour (maybe a light orange?)

destill · 02-10-2006, 06:22

yea, i didnt notice the city skyline at first, it would work much better if it was the darker colour, i also dont like the 'bend' on the font or the central composition you've gone for, it needs some life, some nice lighting would benefit it too, give it some atmosphere!

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cocknose Banned™ Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 3,723	nah.. don't like it, looks disjointed, to much conflict between the positive and negative space... you'v got bits poppin out when it should be flat, you have clean areas where there should be dust. Looks rushed with no reflection(reflection of thought that is)... __________________ Facebook me!

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Megaton Cat bellow average poster Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 560	To be honest, I couldn't instantly distingish the cityscape at the bottom. Looked like a blob to me. I think it would look awsome at the top. Nice overall. Last edited by Megaton Cat : 01-10-2006 at 23:06.

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01-10-2006, 09:00	#2 (permalink)
Scott sanddancer Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: South Shields Posts: 2,998	I like, as with the rest of them, good work mate, well done.

01-10-2006, 11:11	#3 (permalink)
SeanMedia Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Belfast, Ireland Posts: 416	very nice. have you thought about having the cityscape in black coming out of the top? try that - might look better than being cut out of the bottom.

01-10-2006, 14:56	#4 (permalink)
i3lance Read between da lines! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: UK, former Londoner Posts: 849	Good job. I can't fault it.

01-10-2006, 17:59	#5 (permalink)
poppinphresh Web Designer Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 77	I really like it, great work.

02-10-2006, 05:08	#9 (permalink)
Colin-uk Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 9	I think it would look better if the actual landscape (building shapes) were black and the 'splash' was another colour (maybe a light orange?)

02-10-2006, 06:22	#10 (permalink)
destill proper chavin Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Plymouth, UK Posts: 81	yea, i didnt notice the city skyline at first, it would work much better if it was the darker colour, i also dont like the 'bend' on the font or the central composition you've gone for, it needs some life, some nice lighting would benefit it too, give it some atmosphere!

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