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hawken · 24-11-2003, 19:27

*update*
had time over the weekend to do an outlined version. crits welcome as usual. All done in Flash MX

Hello!

I'm new here, found this forum out of frustration of posting on forums where I used to be a regular 3d contributor but now have moved over into illustration.

Theres hardly any illustration forums I can find but this one seemed to suit.

and to kick it all off, something I drew this weekend, inspired by an old girlfriend. Crits welcome!

Narate · 24-11-2003, 19:29

Very nice, but I am a fan of the old shading, gives it more life imo.

thats about it really

gj!

hawken · 24-11-2003, 19:35

well I am going to do a painted version eventually. I have been doing shaded stuff for donkies...

I really wanted to try something a little more muted but bold this time. wires as a bonus. heh. maybe I should do a shaded ver, will post in here if I do. thanks for the crit

dorian · 24-11-2003, 21:30

shapes very nice - but the colours imo need more work... too saturated somehow (skin colour esp.)... reevaluate also the neck

maybe the zip shouldnt be just a line... break it up near the ankle?

Andi · 25-11-2003, 11:58

I really like it! As mentioned, shading would make it even better.
Love the way you did the eyes

tomson · 25-11-2003, 13:05

kinda reminds me of the stuff Wink were doing for Selfridges around this time in 2001.

Agree tho, tis nice.

hawken · 25-11-2003, 23:07

Quote:

Originally Posted by tomson

kinda reminds me of the stuff Wink were doing for Selfridges around this time in 2001.

Agree tho, tis nice.

http://www.winkmedia.com/the_flash/frameset.html

thier snow queen is cool

I can see how it reminds you, but only just.

Toney · 17-12-2003, 02:17

the update is much better than...the old one.

gray · 17-12-2003, 03:20

nice work

(i love http://www.jason-brooks.com hed kandi illustrator)

dan · 17-12-2003, 05:07

If it's the illustrated women you like you'll love this guy...

http://www.shaneglines.net/

Really nice.

24-11-2003, 19:27	#1 (permalink)
hawken Cornish Pasty Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo, Japan Posts: 2,898	Hello! winter character inside update had time over the weekend to do an outlined version. crits welcome as usual. All done in Flash MX Hello! I'm new here, found this forum out of frustration of posting on forums where I used to be a regular 3d contributor but now have moved over into illustration. Theres hardly any illustration forums I can find but this one seemed to suit. and to kick it all off, something I drew this weekend, inspired by an old girlfriend. Crits welcome! Last edited by hawken : 30-11-2003 at 00:39.

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dorian i do lines Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Poland/Denmark Posts: 3,098	shapes very nice - but the colours imo need more work... too saturated somehow (skin colour esp.)... reevaluate also the neck maybe the zip shouldnt be just a line... break it up near the ankle? __________________ ...

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24-11-2003, 19:29	#2 (permalink)
Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,273	Very nice, but I am a fan of the old shading, gives it more life imo. thats about it really gj!

24-11-2003, 19:35	#3 (permalink)
hawken Cornish Pasty Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo, Japan Posts: 2,898	well I am going to do a painted version eventually. I have been doing shaded stuff for donkies... I really wanted to try something a little more muted but bold this time. wires as a bonus. heh. maybe I should do a shaded ver, will post in here if I do. thanks for the crit

25-11-2003, 11:58	#5 (permalink)
Andi Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Malmö, Sweden Posts: 9	I really like it! As mentioned, shading would make it even better. Love the way you did the eyes

25-11-2003, 13:05	#6 (permalink)
tomson Balls in a biscuit tin Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 3,365	kinda reminds me of the stuff Wink were doing for Selfridges around this time in 2001. Agree tho, tis nice.

17-12-2003, 02:17	#8 (permalink)
Toney Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 167	the update is much better than...the old one.

17-12-2003, 03:20	#9 (permalink)
gray i still want paying Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: newcastle, uk Posts: 4,842	nice work (i love http://www.jason-brooks.com hed kandi illustrator)

17-12-2003, 05:07	#10 (permalink)
dan Iris Folder Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: smokey Posts: 2,650	If it's the illustrated women you like you'll love this guy... http://www.shaneglines.net/ Really nice.

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