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studioinart · 07-09-2006, 21:29

Hi Friends;
This is my first post at this forum : )

My customer wanted very clear design. im continue to work on...

please do not hesitate to write your opinions...
thanks all you : )

link here

stylin328 · 07-09-2006, 21:51

I like the header but the typface in the menu is kinda boring and plain. its getting there, keep working at it

studioinart · 07-09-2006, 21:54

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Originally Posted by stylin328

I like the header but the typface in the menu is kinda boring and plain. its getting there, keep working at it

yes, menu is the biggest problem :@
menu is the first thing that i will change ; )

Alexanda · 08-09-2006, 05:41

sort out your typography I'm finding some of your para's difficult to read, especially your testimonials page

i3lance · 08-09-2006, 06:00

Your site doesn't fully extend the length of the page in FF. Plus I agree in part with stylin328, but your nav is a bit naff though.

Its coming along though, keep going mate.

jg9 · 08-09-2006, 07:42

What's the F1 car all about?

i3lance · 08-09-2006, 10:21

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Originally Posted by jg9

What's the F1 car all about?

You could change your life and become the next Schumacher!! That's why.

studioinart · 08-09-2006, 11:39

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Originally Posted by jg9

What's the F1 car all about?

it is all about "success", "exactly that finish moment, the moment that you get your aim"... something like this... my customer wanted me to use f1 finish moment with flag, so i made sth like this

studioinart · 08-09-2006, 11:40

i made some changes on "testimonies page", "navigatioın" and "right column"... i think it is much better now : ) what do you think?

im continue to work on...

jg9 · 08-09-2006, 12:02

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Originally Posted by studioinart

exactly that finish moment, the moment that you get your aim"...

All's sounds a bit porn director to me.

On a more technical note your nav bar jumps around on rollover and the patterned background disappears on all other pages bar the first one, on a Mac.

studioinart · 10-09-2006, 17:12

i made some more changings

cocknose · 10-09-2006, 18:27

why do you have two different types of read ins to your paragraphs.....!!!!?
drop caps and indents... if you are gonna use one choose indents cause you don't have enough text to warrent drop caps.
Also increase your leading on the paragraphs cause things are looking alittle cramped!!! and is possible choose a more legible typeface for body text.
oh... not keen on the text tint neither...

and.... if you do use indents there is no need to have spaces between graphs. Thats the point of the indent to lead the eye.

Daniel Diggle · 12-09-2006, 08:29

I finnished a 'life/sport coaching' site just a while ago too. Though focused more on the sports, it's another site on the subject.

take a look: http://www.behaviouralimprint.com.au

studioinart · 18-09-2006, 20:06

i made some more changes

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07-09-2006, 21:51	#2 (permalink)
stylin328 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 332	I like the header but the typface in the menu is kinda boring and plain. its getting there, keep working at it

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i3lance Read between da lines! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: UK, former Londoner Posts: 849	Your site doesn't fully extend the length of the page in FF. Plus I agree in part with stylin328, but your nav is a bit naff though. Its coming along though, keep going mate.

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jg9 Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southampton Posts: 177	What's the F1 car all about?

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studioinart Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: manchester/England/UK/Earth Posts: 37	i made some changes on "testimonies page", "navigatioın" and "right column"... i think it is much better now : ) what do you think? im continue to work on...

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studioinart Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: manchester/England/UK/Earth Posts: 37	i made some more changings

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cocknose Banned™ Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 3,723	why do you have two different types of read ins to your paragraphs.....!!!!? drop caps and indents... if you are gonna use one choose indents cause you don't have enough text to warrent drop caps. Also increase your leading on the paragraphs cause things are looking alittle cramped!!! and is possible choose a more legible typeface for body text. oh... not keen on the text tint neither... and.... if you do use indents there is no need to have spaces between graphs. Thats the point of the indent to lead the eye.

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Daniel Diggle oh dear me™ Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: UK, London Posts: 117	I finnished a 'life/sport coaching' site just a while ago too. Though focused more on the sports, it's another site on the subject. take a look: http://www.behaviouralimprint.com.au

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