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commodore · 17-08-2006, 12:57

This is a logo I did for my friend's piece of software. Jaaguar is jaguar in Estonian. Sorry for using this popular style for the text but it was the first time for me

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This particular version is made to fit with the website.

http://commodore.gran.ee/asjad/jaaguar.html

rjdugan · 17-08-2006, 13:06

i don't mind the type... it's pretty nice. you might want to rework the treatment you've placed around the type. and the 'mark' isn't bad, but in my humble opinion, you should try reworking a few more permutations...

datahound · 17-08-2006, 13:58

Those spots aren't right? Have a look at a real jaguars eye.

datahound · 17-08-2006, 14:17

http://ftp.solace.mh.se/pub/pics/jaguar.jpg

commodore · 17-08-2006, 16:10

If I would have done the spots so small then the logo wouldn't have been so simple.

commodore · 19-08-2006, 12:53

Only 2 comments

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datahound · 19-08-2006, 13:15

Size of spots is not so much my issue, they need to have essence of Jaguar.

At the moment they just look like random blobs.

stickmus · 21-08-2006, 09:46

Firefox can't find the server at commodore.gran.ee.

17-08-2006, 12:57	#1 (permalink)
commodore Registered User Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 63	[logo] Jaaguar This is a logo I did for my friend's piece of software. Jaaguar is jaguar in Estonian. Sorry for using this popular style for the text but it was the first time for me . This particular version is made to fit with the website. http://commodore.gran.ee/asjad/jaaguar.html

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datahound Spare Parts Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Bracknell Forest Posts: 4,962	Those spots aren't right? Have a look at a real jaguars eye. __________________ poochmedia \| Computer Spare Parts \| Computer & Telephone Disposals

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datahound Spare Parts Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Bracknell Forest Posts: 4,962	Size of spots is not so much my issue, they need to have essence of Jaguar. At the moment they just look like random blobs. Attached Thumbnails __________________ poochmedia \| Computer Spare Parts \| Computer & Telephone Disposals

21-08-2006, 09:46	#8 (permalink)
stickmus hmmm... Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Yorkuk Posts: 2,127	Firefox can't find the server at commodore.gran.ee. __________________ George Smith - a vain attempt to get higher on google for my name

17-08-2006, 13:06	#2 (permalink)
rjdugan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: chicago»wicker park Posts: 167	i don't mind the type... it's pretty nice. you might want to rework the treatment you've placed around the type. and the 'mark' isn't bad, but in my humble opinion, you should try reworking a few more permutations...

17-08-2006, 16:10	#5 (permalink)
commodore Registered User Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 63	If I would have done the spots so small then the logo wouldn't have been so simple.

19-08-2006, 12:53	#6 (permalink)
commodore Registered User Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 63	Only 2 comments ?

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