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FlaGG · 16-08-2006, 10:23

dahke, a fanzine since 1998, now publised in cyberworld, in other words webzine and its new design.

critique welcome please

dahke.zine

stickmus · 16-08-2006, 11:12

Haha

Which one's the cock?

pgo · 16-08-2006, 11:29

Looks good to me.

At first I thought it was "danke zine" which would be hilarious. You could even have a jingle - "Danke zine, darlin', danke zine."

sub · 16-08-2006, 12:06

Quote:

Originally Posted by stickmus

Haha

Which one's the cock?

The one who made that dodgy gif animation?

30equals · 16-08-2006, 12:56

no real design to be seen here. i kinda dislike the "stenciled" background. and i would level up the left and right content with the middle content.

cool that you have a turkish (?) punk zine though.

Vlad · 16-08-2006, 13:35

I think if the stencil writing was little lighter and the background a bit darker, it would be better.

Vlad · 16-08-2006, 13:36

By the way, I would also suggest making the code better.

http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.dahke.net%2Fz ine%2Findex.php

pgo · 16-08-2006, 13:41

Yeah, a dark background would look good.

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FlaGG etilen. Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: ankara/turkey Posts: 3	dahke zine dahke, a fanzine since 1998, now publised in cyberworld, in other words webzine and its new design. critique welcome please dahke.zine

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16-08-2006, 11:29	#3 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Looks good to me. At first I thought it was "danke zine" which would be hilarious. You could even have a jingle - "Danke zine, darlin', danke zine."

16-08-2006, 12:56	#5 (permalink)
30equals Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 146	no real design to be seen here. i kinda dislike the "stenciled" background. and i would level up the left and right content with the middle content. cool that you have a turkish (?) punk zine though.

16-08-2006, 13:35	#6 (permalink)
Vlad Design or die Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Ottawa, Canada Posts: 137	I think if the stencil writing was little lighter and the background a bit darker, it would be better.

16-08-2006, 13:36	#7 (permalink)
Vlad Design or die Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Ottawa, Canada Posts: 137	By the way, I would also suggest making the code better. http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.dahke.net%2Fz ine%2Findex.php

16-08-2006, 13:41	#8 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Yeah, a dark background would look good.

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