Old 16-08-2006, 10:23   #1 (permalink)
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dahke zine

dahke, a fanzine since 1998, now publised in cyberworld, in other words webzine and its new design.

critique welcome please

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Old 16-08-2006, 11:12   #2 (permalink)
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Haha


Which one's the cock?
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Old 16-08-2006, 11:29   #3 (permalink)
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Looks good to me.

At first I thought it was "danke zine" which would be hilarious. You could even have a jingle - "Danke zine, darlin', danke zine."
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Old 16-08-2006, 12:06   #4 (permalink)
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Which one's the cock?
The one who made that dodgy gif animation?
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Old 16-08-2006, 12:56   #5 (permalink)
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no real design to be seen here. i kinda dislike the "stenciled" background. and i would level up the left and right content with the middle content.

cool that you have a turkish (?) punk zine though.
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Old 16-08-2006, 13:35   #6 (permalink)
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I think if the stencil writing was little lighter and the background a bit darker, it would be better.
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Old 16-08-2006, 13:36   #7 (permalink)
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Old 16-08-2006, 13:41   #8 (permalink)
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Yeah, a dark background would look good.
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