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liquidfusion · 01-08-2006, 17:38

So, i dont want a one page design anymore, so am going to be making a new site in flash, and have come up with this. My aims were clean, minimal and functional.

Just looking for crit on the layout really, and anything else if you want!

Thanks

SeanMedia · 01-08-2006, 17:54

I'm guessing that the 'Electro Girl' has an X on her mouth to shut her up, as the previous piece "Repetition Woman' annoyed your head! lol!

Nice design, very clean

rjdugan · 01-08-2006, 18:44

oh oh sooooo clean... and the electro girl looks my ex-g.friend.

.Ryan · 01-08-2006, 19:01

Nice, I like it, fits perfect.

pgo · 01-08-2006, 20:04

It's nice. Still not a big fan of that logo, but that's just me. Otherwise, I have no complaints.

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Originally Posted by rjdugan

and the electro girl looks my ex-g.friend.

Only she's 130 pounds lighter and has all her teeth (probably).

stylin328 · 01-08-2006, 20:25

Nice, Clean design. Less is better, great job

liquidfusion · 01-08-2006, 20:38

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Originally Posted by rjdugan

oh oh sooooo clean... and the electro girl looks my ex-g.friend.

Damn, your girlfriend looked like jennifer garner, you lucky bastard!

Megaton Cat · 01-08-2006, 23:34

I like it.

(Lame comment yeah)

Toney · 02-08-2006, 00:16

cool! i like it.

lukasarts · 02-08-2006, 03:09

Good work, nice to see some simplicity for a change in a portfolio. Have to agree with pgo on the brand, just not my cup of tea. Other than that, run with it.

hawken · 02-08-2006, 04:14

nice logo, not sure what it says.

why flash?

pgo · 02-08-2006, 09:59

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Originally Posted by hawken

nice logo, not sure what it says.

why flash?

It says Destill.

JetBlackNinja · 02-08-2006, 10:32

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Originally Posted by hawken

why flash?

The quick answer is usually one of 3 things

1. fonts

2. Layout control

3. Transition animations

stevo · 02-08-2006, 10:48

dont like the dotted lines or that pixel font. the whitespace (created by the friends section) on the bottom right isnt working. Change the logo.

liquidfusion · 02-08-2006, 12:23

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Originally Posted by stevo

dont like the dotted lines or that pixel font. the whitespace (created by the friends section) on the bottom right isnt working. Change the logo.

ummmm, its not a pixel font and i'm really going to change my logotype am i :p

The whitespace isnt an issue either.

hawken · 02-08-2006, 14:17

the e and t in that logo are very hard to understand, they look like c and n respectively.

one way to solve this would be to use horizontal lines. It's far too abstract to be read at the moment. It wouldn't be beyond you to make it readable, as you haven't used it in your old site.

fetusface · 02-08-2006, 14:57

i love it........nicely minimal.

I would change the logo......its a bit too busy and contradicts the rest of the site....just my opinion.

pgo · 02-08-2006, 15:21

Has anyone else noticed the overuse of the words "clean" and "minimal" - even when it's not appropriate?

It's not relevant in this case, but I'm just saying...

stevo · 02-08-2006, 16:38

…funky, fresh, dynamic

fetusface · 02-08-2006, 22:47

crazy delicious

01-08-2006, 17:38	#1 (permalink)
liquidfusion Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 149	new portfolio design So, i dont want a one page design anymore, so am going to be making a new site in flash, and have come up with this. My aims were clean, minimal and functional. Just looking for crit on the layout really, and anything else if you want! Thanks

02-08-2006, 04:14	#11 (permalink)
hawken Cornish Pasty Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo, Japan Posts: 2,708	nice logo, not sure what it says. why flash? __________________ my blog & portfolio sexy combined package

02-08-2006, 14:17	#16 (permalink)
hawken Cornish Pasty Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo, Japan Posts: 2,708	the e and t in that logo are very hard to understand, they look like c and n respectively. one way to solve this would be to use horizontal lines. It's far too abstract to be read at the moment. It wouldn't be beyond you to make it readable, as you haven't used it in your old site. __________________ my blog & portfolio sexy combined package

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01-08-2006, 17:54	#2 (permalink)
SeanMedia Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Belfast, Ireland Posts: 416	I'm guessing that the 'Electro Girl' has an X on her mouth to shut her up, as the previous piece "Repetition Woman' annoyed your head! lol! Nice design, very clean

01-08-2006, 18:44	#3 (permalink)
rjdugan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: chicago»wicker park Posts: 167	oh oh sooooo clean... and the electro girl looks my ex-g.friend.

01-08-2006, 19:01	#4 (permalink)
.Ryan Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 293	Nice, I like it, fits perfect.

01-08-2006, 20:25	#6 (permalink)
stylin328 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 332	Nice, Clean design. Less is better, great job

01-08-2006, 23:34	#8 (permalink)
Megaton Cat bellow average poster Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 560	I like it. (Lame comment yeah)

02-08-2006, 00:16	#9 (permalink)
Toney Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 167	cool! i like it.

02-08-2006, 03:09	#10 (permalink)
lukasarts Shiv. Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Elsewhere Posts: 1,110	Good work, nice to see some simplicity for a change in a portfolio. Have to agree with pgo on the brand, just not my cup of tea. Other than that, run with it.

02-08-2006, 10:48	#14 (permalink)
stevo Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Glasgow, Scotland Posts: 357	dont like the dotted lines or that pixel font. the whitespace (created by the friends section) on the bottom right isnt working. Change the logo.

02-08-2006, 14:57	#17 (permalink)
fetusface ™™™™™™™ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Calgary, Canada Posts: 473	i love it........nicely minimal. I would change the logo......its a bit too busy and contradicts the rest of the site....just my opinion.

02-08-2006, 15:21	#18 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Has anyone else noticed the overuse of the words "clean" and "minimal" - even when it's not appropriate? It's not relevant in this case, but I'm just saying...

02-08-2006, 16:38	#19 (permalink)
stevo Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Glasgow, Scotland Posts: 357	…funky, fresh, dynamic

02-08-2006, 22:47	#20 (permalink)
fetusface ™™™™™™™ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Calgary, Canada Posts: 473	crazy delicious

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