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ludesign · 13-07-2006, 08:48

Hi,

This is my first thread here and my first design work from a logn time.
First i want you to know that i'm a programmer, not a designer, but from time to time i do a design jobs too.

Here is something that i draw in PhotoShop http://84.242.188.51/temp/Layout-v0.5.1.jpg, it should be a clone of www.bbfunplus.com
But i want it to be a little more stylish and simple.

All critique and advices are welcome. Thanks.

This is what i have done so far.
http://84.242.188.51/temp/Layout-v0.5.1.jpg

bender · 13-07-2006, 09:21

I like the small icons in the upper right corner for some reason.
Looks pretty decent, I would perhaps decrease the size of the main text a little and perhaps add a few pictures to liven it up a little.

adras · 13-07-2006, 09:58

Don't bold the text in the body area, and maybe use a different font. Also I would bold the headings beside the arrows.

pgo · 13-07-2006, 10:54

I think the body text would work better with a sans-serif font.

A decent start.

fetusface · 13-07-2006, 11:44

boring. its simple but not good simple.

ludesign · 13-07-2006, 11:56

Hi,

Thank you all for the comments.
They are really appreciated.

My client is the final decider

Again thanks for your critique and advices.

nekoconeko · 14-07-2006, 20:12

That search button at the top-right is a bit obvious. You might want to drop it down into the grey bar below it, or just make it a simple html input box/submit button like you see everywhere else. Other than that, just fix the body text as per the others' suggestions and maybe introduce another color/images?

13-07-2006, 08:48	#1 (permalink)
ludesign ExCoder Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In The Darkness Posts: 33	Little critique and advices, please :) Hi, This is my first thread here and my first design work from a logn time. First i want you to know that i'm a programmer, not a designer, but from time to time i do a design jobs too. Here is something that i draw in PhotoShop http://84.242.188.51/temp/Layout-v0.5.1.jpg, it should be a clone of www.bbfunplus.com But i want it to be a little more stylish and simple. All critique and advices are welcome. Thanks. This is what i have done so far. http://84.242.188.51/temp/Layout-v0.5.1.jpg Last edited by ludesign : 13-07-2006 at 09:12.

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adras Zły Join Date: May 2004 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,150	Don't bold the text in the body area, and maybe use a different font. Also I would bold the headings beside the arrows. __________________ Be Crisp (tm)

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13-07-2006, 09:21	#2 (permalink)
bender I'd hit it Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Helsinki Posts: 371	I like the small icons in the upper right corner for some reason. Looks pretty decent, I would perhaps decrease the size of the main text a little and perhaps add a few pictures to liven it up a little.

13-07-2006, 10:54	#4 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	I think the body text would work better with a sans-serif font. A decent start.

13-07-2006, 11:44	#5 (permalink)
fetusface ™™™™™™™ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Calgary, Canada Posts: 487	boring. its simple but not good simple.

13-07-2006, 11:56	#6 (permalink)
ludesign ExCoder Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In The Darkness Posts: 33	Hi, Thank you all for the comments. They are really appreciated. My client is the final decider Again thanks for your critique and advices.

14-07-2006, 20:12	#7 (permalink)
nekoconeko That's right, I said it. Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: USA (Dallas, TX) Posts: 65	That search button at the top-right is a bit obvious. You might want to drop it down into the grey bar below it, or just make it a simple html input box/submit button like you see everywhere else. Other than that, just fix the body text as per the others' suggestions and maybe introduce another color/images?

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