Old 30-06-2006, 08:50   #1 (permalink)
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Business Card Critique

Hi All,
I just designed a business card for my company (web design). It is designed along the feeling of the website which is still under construction (www.coffeetone.com)

I'd appreciate any comments, criticism etc.(even on the website)

Thanks!!

CoffeeTone Business Card
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Old 30-06-2006, 08:54   #2 (permalink)
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Haha, your seriously going to have 'Flick our beans'? I'd like to see how many female clients are pulled in by that.

Card echoes website. Result.
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Old 30-06-2006, 08:55   #3 (permalink)
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lmao, love the tag line!
Design looks cool too

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Btw, just checked out your site....it's just an image
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Old 30-06-2006, 08:57   #4 (permalink)
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Old 30-06-2006, 21:10   #5 (permalink)
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Old 30-06-2006, 21:27   #6 (permalink)
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Quote:
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Haha, your seriously going to have 'Flick our beans'? I'd like to see how many female clients are pulled in by that.

Card echoes website. Result.

vivido is female anyways..
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Old 30-06-2006, 23:27   #7 (permalink)
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I like it.. nice
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Old 01-07-2006, 04:36   #8 (permalink)
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Thank You

Thank you guys!
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Old 01-07-2006, 12:57   #9 (permalink)
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Wasn't that tagline gray's or was it weldo's suggestion?
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Old 01-07-2006, 14:00   #10 (permalink)
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Nice site and business card.
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Old 01-07-2006, 21:18   #11 (permalink)
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Just wondering if you understand fully what "flick our beans" connotates?
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Old 01-07-2006, 23:34   #12 (permalink)
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Like the second one better.
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Old 03-07-2006, 02:32   #13 (permalink)
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Wasn't that tagline gray's or was it weldo's suggestion?
weldo's
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Old 03-07-2006, 02:34   #14 (permalink)
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Tell me what do you understand by "Flick Our Beans"?
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Old 03-07-2006, 02:41   #15 (permalink)
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its a euthanism for clitoral stimulation, so thats some good web design
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Old 03-07-2006, 06:01   #16 (permalink)
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going to change that
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Old 03-07-2006, 06:05   #17 (permalink)
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Didn't Anne Summers use a similar tag-line with one of their ad campaigns a couple of years back?
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