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jg9 · 22-05-2006, 10:56

I'm after some feedback for a site I'm currently putting together for myself.

Its only a static page at the moment, as it still a long way off being finished (still need to develop the branding, the copy is only placeholder etc).

What do you think I can do to improve it, what don't you like about it?

Cheers
J

http://www.jamiegregory.co.uk/maverick.html

mx · 22-05-2006, 11:10

not enough there to comment on really...

Megaton Cat · 22-05-2006, 11:12

Looks decent enough.

pgo · 22-05-2006, 11:15

It's pretty, but that dropshadow/gradient thing has really obvious edges, which makes it look nasty. It either needs to be solid background color or a subtle dropshadow.

jg9 · 22-05-2006, 11:20

Quote:

Originally Posted by pgo

It's pretty, but that dropshadow/gradient thing has really obvious edges, which makes it look nasty. It either needs to be solid background color or a subtle dropshadow.

Yeah I have have noticed that, something that I'll sort.

adam c · 22-05-2006, 12:08

The copy alignment looks out of place with the top nav.

pgo · 22-05-2006, 12:34

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Originally Posted by adam c

The copy alignment looks out of place with the top nav.

I was gonna mention that, too.

NickBolton · 22-05-2006, 16:24

It's simple. I like it.

swehner · 22-05-2006, 17:10

In general I think the front page should have more content. Don't search engines like that too?

I would leave out the quotes of 'our aim ... . '

I would also leave out "we provide" in ... ensures we provide the very best solution ...

Stephan

jg9 · 23-05-2006, 04:57

Cheers for the feedback guys.

30equals · 23-05-2006, 12:28

like it, it has potential

jthomas · 23-05-2006, 14:19

Um. Yes. Looks like it's going to turn out very nice.

dasplague · 24-05-2006, 04:13

great colors, very clean. i like.

lou · 24-05-2006, 07:55

sort the typography 'our aim is to...'

move the (') outside the paragraph so that all the first letters line up proper

other than that its nice and clean - i like clouds

jthomas · 26-05-2006, 04:27

I agree with the gradient graphic and the quotation adjustment as well.

22-05-2006, 10:56	#1 (permalink)
jg9 Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southampton Posts: 177	Feedback for site I'm after some feedback for a site I'm currently putting together for myself. Its only a static page at the moment, as it still a long way off being finished (still need to develop the branding, the copy is only placeholder etc). What do you think I can do to improve it, what don't you like about it? Cheers J http://www.jamiegregory.co.uk/maverick.html

22-05-2006, 11:10	#2 (permalink)
mx fucksocks™ Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: in the boosh Posts: 1,632	not enough there to comment on really... __________________

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22-05-2006, 11:12	#3 (permalink)
Megaton Cat bellow average poster Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 560	Looks decent enough.

22-05-2006, 11:15	#4 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	It's pretty, but that dropshadow/gradient thing has really obvious edges, which makes it look nasty. It either needs to be solid background color or a subtle dropshadow.

22-05-2006, 12:08	#6 (permalink)
adam c berserker than thou Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Bristol Posts: 450	The copy alignment looks out of place with the top nav.

22-05-2006, 16:24	#8 (permalink)
NickBolton Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 3	It's simple. I like it.

22-05-2006, 17:10	#9 (permalink)
swehner Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 23	In general I think the front page should have more content. Don't search engines like that too? I would leave out the quotes of 'our aim ... . ' I would also leave out "we provide" in ... ensures we provide the very best solution ... Stephan

23-05-2006, 04:57	#10 (permalink)
jg9 Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southampton Posts: 177	Cheers for the feedback guys.

23-05-2006, 12:28	#11 (permalink)
30equals Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 146	like it, it has potential

23-05-2006, 14:19	#12 (permalink)
jthomas coffee is not a crime Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Illinois, USA Posts: 455	Um. Yes. Looks like it's going to turn out very nice.

24-05-2006, 04:13	#13 (permalink)
dasplague ckk! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Texas, USA. Posts: 76	great colors, very clean. i like.

24-05-2006, 07:55	#14 (permalink)
lou flaps Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: aberdeen Posts: 179	sort the typography 'our aim is to...' move the (') outside the paragraph so that all the first letters line up proper other than that its nice and clean - i like clouds

26-05-2006, 04:27	#15 (permalink)
jthomas coffee is not a crime Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Illinois, USA Posts: 455	I agree with the gradient graphic and the quotation adjustment as well.

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