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chris_bcn · 21-05-2006, 23:02

It's a work in progress at the moment, but it's taking shape

can you have a quick look and tell me if there's anything that stands out as needing work?

Comps
http://www.comediadesign.com/potrero/bi/layout1.jpg
http://www.comediadesign.com/potrer...ayoutindex2.jpg

http://www.comediadesign.com/potrero/bi/wireframe.html
http://www.comediadesign.com/potrero/bi/index.html

Any thoughts and comments are much appreciated

Eyual · 21-05-2006, 23:09

The teal color that underlies some of the boxes dose not look that good to me..

Their are a few things that just look a bit akward I just can not put my finger on it..

But overall very nice for work in progress

pgo · 22-05-2006, 00:48

Looks pretty good. I think it could do without the stripes in the background - just a solid color would be fine, I think.

i3lance · 22-05-2006, 09:37

I think it's good work in progress. As pgo, a solid bg color is probably better.

However I can see the relation (and where you were going) with the bg pattern and the navigation.

gray · 22-05-2006, 09:39

haha how distracting are the fantastic four(?)

pgo · 22-05-2006, 11:21

Wow, I didn't even notice them.

swehner · 22-05-2006, 17:27

Looks a little "slow" to me in delivering content to the reader -- I think there is too much empty space.

Could the navigation bar be centered ? ( * Home * This is a top link * This is a top link * Search by Location )

Stephan

jthomas · 23-05-2006, 14:39

I like how you used the color theme. Very nice. A minor detail that sticks out to me is the rounded corners. It seems like you used teh same radius on the inner boxes as you did on the outer box, so naturally, the inner boxes look a bit to "fat" and they don't follow the edge of your outer ones smoothly. But, like I said. Minor.

chris_bcn · 23-05-2006, 15:47

hmm.. interesting - thanks for that. I'll have a play about with a smaller radius on the inner pics

21-05-2006, 23:02	#1 (permalink)
chris_bcn Goodbye little old lady Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Geordie in SF Posts: 340	Quick C&C please It's a work in progress at the moment, but it's taking shape can you have a quick look and tell me if there's anything that stands out as needing work? Comps http://www.comediadesign.com/potrero/bi/layout1.jpg http://www.comediadesign.com/potrer...ayoutindex2.jpg http://www.comediadesign.com/potrero/bi/wireframe.html http://www.comediadesign.com/potrero/bi/index.html Any thoughts and comments are much appreciated Last edited by Stickman : 22-05-2006 at 05:06. Reason: fix a link

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21-05-2006, 23:09	#2 (permalink)
Eyual Afro Designer Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 83	The teal color that underlies some of the boxes dose not look that good to me.. Their are a few things that just look a bit akward I just can not put my finger on it.. But overall very nice for work in progress

22-05-2006, 00:48	#3 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Looks pretty good. I think it could do without the stripes in the background - just a solid color would be fine, I think.

22-05-2006, 09:37	#4 (permalink)
i3lance Read between da lines! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: UK, former Londoner Posts: 849	I think it's good work in progress. As pgo, a solid bg color is probably better. However I can see the relation (and where you were going) with the bg pattern and the navigation.

22-05-2006, 09:39	#5 (permalink)
gray i still want paying Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: newcastle, uk Posts: 4,842	haha how distracting are the fantastic four(?)

22-05-2006, 11:21	#6 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Wow, I didn't even notice them.

22-05-2006, 17:27	#7 (permalink)
swehner Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 23	Looks a little "slow" to me in delivering content to the reader -- I think there is too much empty space. Could the navigation bar be centered ? ( * Home * This is a top link * This is a top link * Search by Location ) Stephan

23-05-2006, 14:39	#8 (permalink)
jthomas coffee is not a crime Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Illinois, USA Posts: 455	I like how you used the color theme. Very nice. A minor detail that sticks out to me is the rounded corners. It seems like you used teh same radius on the inner boxes as you did on the outer box, so naturally, the inner boxes look a bit to "fat" and they don't follow the edge of your outer ones smoothly. But, like I said. Minor.

23-05-2006, 15:47	#9 (permalink)
chris_bcn Goodbye little old lady Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Geordie in SF Posts: 340	hmm.. interesting - thanks for that. I'll have a play about with a smaller radius on the inner pics

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