Old 10-05-2006, 07:03   #1 (permalink)
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city anthems

the colour has been affected slightly due to loss of quality, but which do you prefer? if any?
any improvements?
i know the bottom two suck alot but its nice to add in some simpler ones.
try not to focus alot on the type, its mainly the graphics i want feedback on but if you think the type is WELL shit, then say.

(this is for an as exam so the more blatant and cliche, the better)

1, 2

3, 4

5, 6


thanks!
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Old 10-05-2006, 07:06   #2 (permalink)
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like the imagery and the type fo the top 2... hard to chose?
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Old 10-05-2006, 07:22   #3 (permalink)
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IMO, fist is the best. Colours are verry grim, perhaps intentionally so?
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Old 10-05-2006, 07:27   #4 (permalink)
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yeh i wanted it to look a bit grimey, thanks.
anymore?
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Old 10-05-2006, 07:34   #5 (permalink)
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The top two.
Think you should dampen the reflections on headphones in #1.
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Old 10-05-2006, 07:35   #6 (permalink)
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dampen the relection = soften the white bits?
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Old 10-05-2006, 07:45   #7 (permalink)
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Yeah, think it looks more cutout than it needs to. I'd darken the glare and look at the outline where there's a few light bits which look wrong (above S for example). Only minor.
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Old 10-05-2006, 07:47   #8 (permalink)
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thanks, i'll get onto that and repost.
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Old 10-05-2006, 08:00   #9 (permalink)
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less white


no white


i've darkened that building slightly too

better?
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Old 10-05-2006, 08:12   #10 (permalink)
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Yep. Less white, not too dark.

Lets hope I'm marking it too.
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