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Andy · 10-05-2006, 07:03

the colour has been affected slightly due to loss of quality, but which do you prefer? if any?
any improvements?
i know the bottom two suck alot but its nice to add in some simpler ones.
try not to focus alot on the type, its mainly the graphics i want feedback on but if you think the type is WELL shit, then say.

(this is for an as exam so the more blatant and cliche, the better)

1, 2

3, 4

5, 6

thanks!

finbarr · 10-05-2006, 07:06

like the imagery and the type fo the top 2... hard to chose?

sean_r · 10-05-2006, 07:22

IMO, fist is the best. Colours are verry grim, perhaps intentionally so?

Andy · 10-05-2006, 07:27

yeh i wanted it to look a bit grimey, thanks.
anymore?

Stickman · 10-05-2006, 07:34

The top two.
Think you should dampen the reflections on headphones in #1.

Andy · 10-05-2006, 07:35

dampen the relection = soften the white bits?

Stickman · 10-05-2006, 07:45

Yeah, think it looks more cutout than it needs to. I'd darken the glare and look at the outline where there's a few light bits which look wrong (above S for example). Only minor.

Andy · 10-05-2006, 07:47

thanks, i'll get onto that and repost.

Andy · 10-05-2006, 08:00

less white

no white

i've darkened that building slightly too

better?

Stickman · 10-05-2006, 08:12

Yep. Less white, not too dark.

Lets hope I'm marking it too.

10-05-2006, 07:03	#1 (permalink)
Andy liquid cosh Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: leeds/brighton Posts: 3,119	city anthems the colour has been affected slightly due to loss of quality, but which do you prefer? if any? any improvements? i know the bottom two suck alot but its nice to add in some simpler ones. try not to focus alot on the type, its mainly the graphics i want feedback on but if you think the type is WELL shit, then say. (this is for an as exam so the more blatant and cliche, the better) 1, 2 3, 4 5, 6 thanks! __________________ PORTFOLIO or MOUNT MILK

10-05-2006, 07:27	#4 (permalink)
Andy liquid cosh Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: leeds/brighton Posts: 3,119	yeh i wanted it to look a bit grimey, thanks. anymore? __________________ PORTFOLIO or MOUNT MILK

10-05-2006, 07:35	#6 (permalink)
Andy liquid cosh Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: leeds/brighton Posts: 3,119	dampen the relection = soften the white bits? __________________ PORTFOLIO or MOUNT MILK

10-05-2006, 07:47	#8 (permalink)
Andy liquid cosh Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: leeds/brighton Posts: 3,119	thanks, i'll get onto that and repost. __________________ PORTFOLIO or MOUNT MILK

10-05-2006, 08:00	#9 (permalink)
Andy liquid cosh Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: leeds/brighton Posts: 3,119	less white no white i've darkened that building slightly too better? __________________ PORTFOLIO or MOUNT MILK

10-05-2006, 07:06	#2 (permalink)
finbarr who the fuck am i? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: london Posts: 2,686	like the imagery and the type fo the top 2... hard to chose?

10-05-2006, 07:22	#3 (permalink)
sean_r Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: London Posts: 1,092	IMO, fist is the best. Colours are verry grim, perhaps intentionally so?

10-05-2006, 07:34	#5 (permalink)
Stickman Dr. Lucien Sanchez Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: UK Posts: 5,572	The top two. Think you should dampen the reflections on headphones in #1.

10-05-2006, 07:45	#7 (permalink)
Stickman Dr. Lucien Sanchez Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: UK Posts: 5,572	Yeah, think it looks more cutout than it needs to. I'd darken the glare and look at the outline where there's a few light bits which look wrong (above S for example). Only minor.

10-05-2006, 08:12	#10 (permalink)
Stickman Dr. Lucien Sanchez Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: UK Posts: 5,572	Yep. Less white, not too dark. Lets hope I'm marking it too.

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