[mms]

Hey Im pretty new to design only 15 just playing around with some idas at the moment. What do use think of the below advert any faults or critism! Thanks shane

[xio]

Of the whole thing, I like the daisy only. Try not to clutter your design with things that do not promote what you say/sell. Work with colors carefully and don't just use them because they exist in the palette. And above all, browse around and look and learn by example.

<bitchmode>

Oh, and use English with more care - there are people who supposedly will read you - I guess you want them to understand what you want to say, no?

</bithmode>

[pgo]

I'd say those arcs should be...more "arc-like". I don't understand their purpose either.

[mms]

lol no i didnt really have a purpose for them, just trying things out thought they were nice.

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When closing the bitchmode try and spell bitch correct but thanks for the feedback
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[xio]

Oweee. I can't even spell bitch!

[hit-squad]

its a bit random - i think that its a it basic and blocky - if your trying to sell flowers why not do a flower collage type thing with stocks??

[TWOshay]

start with the typography, the typeface itself doesnt particularly interest me, spelling aside. it looks like you have used myriad or something, pic something a little more exciting. and as for the angle, at first glance i couldnt read it, i had to have a second look, so maybe take a look at that.

maybe lift the daisy out of the grass a little, its getting lost. and also one major thing that realy bothers me about this is the step and repeat thing going on with the grass, put a little extra time in and draw each blade indevidualy, im sure itll make the design stand out alot more.

other than that, youre doing a alright