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dura · 06-05-2006, 06:29

Hey guys,

Looking for a bit of help...These were part of a uni project to design the logo for a textiles company. I'm happy with the logo but always find it hard applying it to buisness cards and stationary.

Any help/comments greatly appreciated.

Cheers

pat · 06-05-2006, 08:00

I think the first one, but with a different font for the addresses - perhaps a less detailed serif face. Like the blue, like the flowers, like the logo. Don't like the orange or the font used for the "flawless aesthetics" stuff, but like that text.

Is it going to be double-sided? Maybe on the other side you could bring that crest in, perhaps centre it with the "flawless" text underneath - could try that blue on a white background.

Limbo · 06-05-2006, 08:06

along the same lines as pat... the crest is nice but needs a bit more work - no need for the asterisk.

Liking the style but small adjustments are needed.

The T in telephone and E in e-mail are left aligned - so the stems don't match...

Narate · 06-05-2006, 08:29

I say the third one, although you can tell you pinched that cow thing as the background is the wrong colour blue.

Also, floral, boooo

pgo · 06-05-2006, 12:33

Definitely #3. As they said it could use a bit of tweaking. Looks good to me though.

Wasn't Jelly Baby doing something called "Loom" at some point? Same university?

j_polo9 · 06-05-2006, 15:33

hmm don't like the leading on the third one. Crest is aight but needs some work doesn't really feel strong i guess. What if you tried some with the logo at a lower apacit and more as a background thing behind the text or something? Also the card just doesn't feel elegant, which the logo seems to be trying to get across. Maybe some kind of border or corner gettup i dunno.

dura · 06-05-2006, 16:35

Quote:

Originally Posted by j_polo9

Also the card just doesn't feel elegant, which the logo seems to be trying to get across. Maybe some kind of border or corner gettup i dunno.

Think I'm happier with that.
Cheers all.

dura · 06-05-2006, 16:35

Quote:

Originally Posted by pgo

Wasn't Jelly Baby doing something called "Loom" at some point? Same university?

Different uni. but it was for the same competition.

sean_r · 06-05-2006, 16:47

Better mate

you may want to tighten the kerning between the O and M a little? And as somebody mentioned, it could be white on the reverse, with blue detail/text. What info is there to include?

dura · 06-05-2006, 17:15

Jelly Baby · 06-05-2006, 22:25

I like the 3rd one!

j_polo9 · 06-05-2006, 22:25

Quote:

Originally Posted by dura

Think I'm happier with that.
Cheers all.

Ahh yes i like that one better!

smallbeer · 07-05-2006, 06:33

I'd work on the

the flowers are a bit irrelevant and a bit

Mik · 07-05-2006, 07:14

get some fruit in there.

dura · 07-05-2006, 07:45

There not ment to be flowers, It's ment to be the mantling from the family shield style logo. Need to include the full logo on the business cards to avoid confusion then, haha.

I'd put the logo up but it's saying my attachments are full, how do I empty/delete them??

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Limbo Another turn. Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 6,021	along the same lines as pat... the crest is nice but needs a bit more work - no need for the asterisk. Liking the style but small adjustments are needed. The T in telephone and E in e-mail are left aligned - so the stems don't match...

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Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,273	I say the third one, although you can tell you pinched that cow thing as the background is the wrong colour blue. Also, floral, boooo

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pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Definitely #3. As they said it could use a bit of tweaking. Looks good to me though. Wasn't Jelly Baby doing something called "Loom" at some point? Same university?

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j_polo9 j_polo9 Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: NorCal Posts: 124	hmm don't like the leading on the third one. Crest is aight but needs some work doesn't really feel strong i guess. What if you tried some with the logo at a lower apacit and more as a background thing behind the text or something? Also the card just doesn't feel elegant, which the logo seems to be trying to get across. Maybe some kind of border or corner gettup i dunno.

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sean_r Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: London Posts: 1,092	Better mate you may want to tighten the kerning between the O and M a little? And as somebody mentioned, it could be white on the reverse, with blue detail/text. What info is there to include?

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Jelly Baby 'And are you cooool?' Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Frome Nr Bath Posts: 1,285	I like the 3rd one!

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smallbeer I Ain't Losing Any Sleep™ Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 5,206	I'd work on the the flowers are a bit irrelevant and a bit

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Mik Magazines™ Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Glasgow.. Posts: 11,886	get some fruit in there.

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dura escuche la musica ruidosa Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: C'dizzle Posts: 191	There not ment to be flowers, It's ment to be the mantling from the family shield style logo. Need to include the full logo on the business cards to avoid confusion then, haha. I'd put the logo up but it's saying my attachments are full, how do I empty/delete them??

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