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intrinzik · 03-05-2006, 23:28

This is just a first layout to get the basic feel i want to achieve, i am looking for constructive cnc to make this better and shit like that

pgo · 04-05-2006, 00:09

Looks OK to me. I'd drop the Alienware computer. At least it looks like an ugly Alienware computer.

j_polo9 · 04-05-2006, 00:37

colours are good and gradients... not much more too it than that. Nice and clean but a bit boring and empty. keep at it. Don't really see how the computer fits either.

LadynRed · 04-05-2006, 10:52

Yes, that's an Alienware Area 51 machine - I own one in Plasma Purple

If you want to sell your services, forget the '18 year old high school student', you are automatically prejudicing yourself by saying you're a kid. Fix the spelling and grammar, nothing screams 'unprofessional' like bad spelling and even worse grammar.

Other than that, it's nice and clean but rather unremarkable.

pgo · 04-05-2006, 11:17

Quote:

Originally Posted by LadynRed

Yes, that's an Alienware Area 51 machine - I own one in Plasma Purple

I don't see why, they're as overpriced as Macs. Except Macs are pretty, Alienware is uuuugly. Didn't they just get bought out by Dell or was that a rumor?

intrinzik · 05-05-2006, 00:27

Thanks for your comments, this is just a first markup so i will add more and more everyday. Any idea what i should put in place of the alineware computer, a logo maybe? also should i add the information about my self to the right side and keep the middle part for updates or just put all of my work there?

roto · 05-05-2006, 01:35

Quote:

Originally Posted by LadynRed

Fix the spelling and grammar, nothing screams 'unprofessional' like bad spelling and even worse grammar.

...And run-on sentences:

Quote:

Originally Posted by LadynRed

If you want to sell your services, forget the '18 year old high school student', you are automatically prejudicing yourself by saying you're a kid.

LadynRed · 05-05-2006, 12:04

I don't see any run-on sentences in my post, it is properly punctuated.

PGO, I actually didn't pay any horrendous price for my Area-51 machine. I got a screaming machine with quality components - unlike the gateway and dell crap on the market. It has space for a 5-drive RAID, has 2 3.2Ghz Intel Processors and 1 GB or RAM - and I can get more in it. I wanted something that was very expandable, fast, well-built, and would last me for a few years. I work on Dells at work, they suck and their customer service is pathetic. Gateway is in the crapper, wasn't buying another one of those. In short, Alienware had the best bang for my buck. It runs my games like a dream and I never have to wait on Photoshop with the 2 processors. Oh.. and I like the colors

roto · 05-05-2006, 13:33

Quote:

Originally Posted by LadynRed

I don't see any run-on sentences in my post, it is properly punctuated.

FWIW, you can properly punctuate a sentence to death, but it can still be considered a run-on.

pgo · 05-05-2006, 14:58

Quote:

Originally Posted by LadynRed

I work on Dells at work, they suck and their customer service is pathetic. Gateway is in the crapper, wasn't buying another one of those. In short, Alienware had the best bang for my buck. It runs my games like a dream and I never have to wait on Photoshop with the 2 processors. Oh.. and I like the colors

Well whatever works for you!

I just prefer to build them myself. I'm a nerd that way.

Ytrav · 21-05-2006, 01:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by LadynRed

I don't see any run-on sentences in my post, it is properly punctuated.

PGO, I actually didn't pay any horrendous price for my Area-51 machine. I got a screaming machine with quality components - unlike the gateway and dell crap on the market. It has space for a 5-drive RAID, has 2 3.2Ghz Intel Processors and 1 GB or RAM - and I can get more in it. I wanted something that was very expandable, fast, well-built, and would last me for a few years. I work on Dells at work, they suck and their customer service is pathetic. Gateway is in the crapper, wasn't buying another one of those. In short, Alienware had the best bang for my buck. It runs my games like a dream and I never have to wait on Photoshop with the 2 processors. Oh.. and I like the colors

Tell me what 64 bit application you use that would need 2 processors, then I will tell you you didn't waste your money. Your applications also need mulit-thred support to be able to even take advantage of the processors. I'm sorry but dual-processors dosn't increase performance to an affect you can see, big misconception, it's just a money grabber.The more money you purchase for a computer dosn't always equate to performance.

top_buzz · 21-05-2006, 07:31

Windows Vista will benefit from dual cpu's.

pat · 21-05-2006, 08:07

gaaays.

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04-05-2006, 00:09	#2 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Looks OK to me. I'd drop the Alienware computer. At least it looks like an ugly Alienware computer.

04-05-2006, 00:37	#3 (permalink)
j_polo9 j_polo9 Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: NorCal Posts: 124	colours are good and gradients... not much more too it than that. Nice and clean but a bit boring and empty. keep at it. Don't really see how the computer fits either.

04-05-2006, 10:52	#4 (permalink)
LadynRed Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 147	Yes, that's an Alienware Area 51 machine - I own one in Plasma Purple If you want to sell your services, forget the '18 year old high school student', you are automatically prejudicing yourself by saying you're a kid. Fix the spelling and grammar, nothing screams 'unprofessional' like bad spelling and even worse grammar. Other than that, it's nice and clean but rather unremarkable.

05-05-2006, 00:27	#6 (permalink)
intrinzik Ya'll Niggas No Who I Is Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 33	Thanks for your comments, this is just a first markup so i will add more and more everyday. Any idea what i should put in place of the alineware computer, a logo maybe? also should i add the information about my self to the right side and keep the middle part for updates or just put all of my work there?

05-05-2006, 12:04	#8 (permalink)
LadynRed Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 147	I don't see any run-on sentences in my post, it is properly punctuated. PGO, I actually didn't pay any horrendous price for my Area-51 machine. I got a screaming machine with quality components - unlike the gateway and dell crap on the market. It has space for a 5-drive RAID, has 2 3.2Ghz Intel Processors and 1 GB or RAM - and I can get more in it. I wanted something that was very expandable, fast, well-built, and would last me for a few years. I work on Dells at work, they suck and their customer service is pathetic. Gateway is in the crapper, wasn't buying another one of those. In short, Alienware had the best bang for my buck. It runs my games like a dream and I never have to wait on Photoshop with the 2 processors. Oh.. and I like the colors

21-05-2006, 07:31	#12 (permalink)
top_buzz For your health! Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 2,588	Windows Vista will benefit from dual cpu's.

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