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chris_bcn · 25-04-2006, 18:44

I'll be sending this comp off to the client tomorrow.

Logo and Name have been changed.

Any C&C would be great so I can refine it and send it off. Assuming you don't think I should scrap it and start again

It's not exactly the most exciting site - Mortgage lender!!

pgo · 25-04-2006, 18:51

Looks good to me. However, the yellow headings and some of the text on the left menu are so light that they're unreadable.

chris_bcn · 25-04-2006, 18:55

good call - I'll darken those up a bit. Cheers

finbarr · 26-04-2006, 05:12

agree with PGO and also the submit buttons look a bit off.

Other than that looks good

i3lance · 26-04-2006, 05:22

I also agree with pgo/finbarr. The heading are not very legible buts thats because they are not dark enough.

Other than that nice job.

chris_bcn · 26-04-2006, 13:23

One line email back from the client

"too much green"

Helpful that. Time to come up with a new colour scheme then

chris_bcn · 28-04-2006, 17:38

Rejected out of hand in fact - He wants it to look more like time.com or forbes.com and be more california.

Next attempt - thoughts?

http://www.geocities.com/clbasey/gdftoo.html
http://www.geocities.com/clbasey/gdf.html

pgo · 28-04-2006, 21:13

So...he wants a portal that's very "california".

Shit, man. I'm stumped.

Dusteh · 29-04-2006, 06:41

God I hate clients like that.

"Make it like BMW!"
err you want it to look like the BMW website?
"no, I want it to feel BMW - stylish, solid"
riiiight.

chris_bcn · 01-05-2006, 00:46

pleased I'm not the only one.

Well - He loved that one!! I'll be pleased to get this one finished and cheque cashed!

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25-04-2006, 18:51	#2 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Looks good to me. However, the yellow headings and some of the text on the left menu are so light that they're unreadable.

25-04-2006, 18:55	#3 (permalink)
chris_bcn Goodbye little old lady Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Geordie in SF Posts: 340	good call - I'll darken those up a bit. Cheers

26-04-2006, 05:12	#4 (permalink)
finbarr who the fuck am i? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: london Posts: 2,686	agree with PGO and also the submit buttons look a bit off. Other than that looks good

26-04-2006, 05:22	#5 (permalink)
i3lance Read between da lines! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: UK, former Londoner Posts: 849	I also agree with pgo/finbarr. The heading are not very legible buts thats because they are not dark enough. Other than that nice job.

26-04-2006, 13:23	#6 (permalink)
chris_bcn Goodbye little old lady Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Geordie in SF Posts: 340	One line email back from the client "too much green" Helpful that. Time to come up with a new colour scheme then

28-04-2006, 17:38	#7 (permalink)
chris_bcn Goodbye little old lady Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Geordie in SF Posts: 340	Rejected out of hand in fact - He wants it to look more like time.com or forbes.com and be more california. Next attempt - thoughts? http://www.geocities.com/clbasey/gdftoo.html http://www.geocities.com/clbasey/gdf.html

28-04-2006, 21:13	#8 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	So...he wants a portal that's very "california". Shit, man. I'm stumped.

29-04-2006, 06:41	#9 (permalink)
Dusteh Sir digby chicken caesar Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 5,413	God I hate clients like that. "Make it like BMW!" err you want it to look like the BMW website? "no, I want it to feel BMW - stylish, solid" riiiight.

01-05-2006, 00:46	#10 (permalink)
chris_bcn Goodbye little old lady Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Geordie in SF Posts: 340	pleased I'm not the only one. Well - He loved that one!! I'll be pleased to get this one finished and cheque cashed!

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