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gratus · 07-02-2006, 09:44

Hello everyone,
Please crit my last mockup:
http://www.ljplus.ru/img/g/r/gratus/mfra__mockup.jpg

P.S. I`m always open for freelance job, ask for portfolio at PM.

Brown · 07-02-2006, 10:05

Company Overview & Featured Projects is pretty illegible. Actually, the navigation font's not that clear either.

I'm not sure about the indents on the paragraphs.

Rather nice though.

mx · 07-02-2006, 10:38

I like it, but I also agree with browns comments about your font choice and the indents, which imo makes the content in the main area look a bit lost.

oli · 07-02-2006, 12:58

OK, looks like its missing something down the bottom. try a footer or something.

i3lance · 08-02-2006, 06:10

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Originally Posted by oli

OK, looks like its missing something down the bottom. try a footer or something.

Seconded. Also try textual secondary nav at bottom above the footer.

pgo · 08-02-2006, 22:29

I like it.

Suggestions above are good ones.

smallbeer · 09-02-2006, 04:54

I'd move the navigation tabs to the left. they look a bit squashed where they are to me.

if they were moved I'd then bring the "browse our portfolio" tab higher so that it was jutting out of the top of the layout. it has a drop shadow so really should look more like it's raised anyway.

I wouldn't mind seeing an inner page to see how much the layout will be changing.

j_polo9 · 09-02-2006, 05:12

can't read the text under the logo, also why is there a chunk missing from the logo? Don't like the drop shadow on the blue thing makes it stick out. Little too much going on. Colours are nice but maybe some burgandy on some text to give some direction. Don't like the drop down boxes. Nice and clean though with a good corporatish feel.

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gratus freelancer Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 2	my first post Hello everyone, Please crit my last mockup: http://www.ljplus.ru/img/g/r/gratus/mfra__mockup.jpg P.S. I`m always open for freelance job, ask for portfolio at PM.

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07-02-2006, 10:05	#2 (permalink)
Brown volkswagen yellow & gold Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: london, england. Posts: 6,147	Company Overview & Featured Projects is pretty illegible. Actually, the navigation font's not that clear either. I'm not sure about the indents on the paragraphs. Rather nice though.

07-02-2006, 10:38	#3 (permalink)
mx fucksocks™ Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: in the boosh Posts: 1,632	I like it, but I also agree with browns comments about your font choice and the indents, which imo makes the content in the main area look a bit lost.

07-02-2006, 12:58	#4 (permalink)
oli Low flying star™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester, England.™ Posts: 10,018	OK, looks like its missing something down the bottom. try a footer or something.

08-02-2006, 22:29	#6 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	I like it. Suggestions above are good ones.

09-02-2006, 04:54	#7 (permalink)
smallbeer I Ain't Losing Any Sleep™ Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 5,206	I'd move the navigation tabs to the left. they look a bit squashed where they are to me. if they were moved I'd then bring the "browse our portfolio" tab higher so that it was jutting out of the top of the layout. it has a drop shadow so really should look more like it's raised anyway. I wouldn't mind seeing an inner page to see how much the layout will be changing.

09-02-2006, 05:12	#8 (permalink)
j_polo9 j_polo9 Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: NorCal Posts: 124	can't read the text under the logo, also why is there a chunk missing from the logo? Don't like the drop shadow on the blue thing makes it stick out. Little too much going on. Colours are nice but maybe some burgandy on some text to give some direction. Don't like the drop down boxes. Nice and clean though with a good corporatish feel.

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