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Old 30-01-2006, 10:27   #1 (permalink)
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Please review my *NEW SITE* www.fitted-kitchens-uk.com

Please review my *NEW SITE* - www.fitted-kitchens-uk.com

Please review my new site www.fitted-kitchens-uk.com. I would appreciate any critique, particularly concerning usability, images and navigation.
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Old 30-01-2006, 10:57   #2 (permalink)
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apologies but:

very dated designwise, code is a mess, shouldnt terms and conditions be on their own page, no thread running through the different sections, online shop looks completely different to homepage, navigation is almost completely lost.

All in all not good
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Old 30-01-2006, 12:12   #3 (permalink)
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<h2 align="left" class="style39 style13 style13 style13 style42"> Why is buying a kitchen over the internet better for me? </h2>
I think that sums up the code.

Absolutely terrible site - design is all over the place & the code is worse.

You're looking at starting from scratch.
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Old 30-01-2006, 12:18   #4 (permalink)
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Amazing.

DreamWeaver script-junk, tables for layout, utter lack of semantics.

1997 called—they want their website back.
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Old 30-01-2006, 12:18   #5 (permalink)
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Off the top of your head, what does 'style13' do?

Now ask yourself if you'll remember that in a few weeks/months time when you come to update the site.

Try and go with class names that have some form of semantic meaning without being overly specific. IE; dont say something is 'green' in case you decide to change its color. go with somethign along the lines of 'highlight' then it's an easy job to a) remember what it does and b) change it at a later date and not have to alter the html
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Old 30-01-2006, 12:24   #6 (permalink)
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Here are my thoughts:
there is no clear design.
it seems from what you have presented to your client that it is disorganized. that is all code im not an expert on. here are some simple suggestions to organize it better.
- all buttons with the black gradient should be together maybe in the 1st left column.
- all the text about fitted could go in an iframe in the center column.
- colonial and burbidge kitchens could be a button as well as FAQ.
- then it will look more designed and orgainzed.
- dont show the table border either. yuuuk!
- update your © copyright
- i cant stand the generic blue link color.
- you have the index-follow in your tag so you dont need your index.html to be so text heavy chilll!
design is a good idea!
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Old 30-01-2006, 16:27   #7 (permalink)
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WOW - I bought a copy of dreamweaver so now I'm a designer. BAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 30-01-2006, 17:57   #8 (permalink)
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all the text about fitted could go in an iframe in the center column.

Disgraceful code advice. 3 Demerits. Now go and stand in the corner and think about what you've said.
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Old 30-01-2006, 18:15   #9 (permalink)
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Nevali has basically summed up this site design in one sentence.

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1997 called—they want their website back.

Absolutely dated design with no structure for thought, this was not a well thought out design and it’s clearly reflected this in site.

The site banner for me is screaming awful taste and this is site for decking out kitchens and the banner isn't even conveying a sense of style!

What chance does this site have to actually functioning correctly? = The answer none.

Purple-ish/Pink navigational buttons in tiresome rectangle fashion is just so poor taste for something that is supposed to be supporting design around the home.

The site has no structure and since structure is base of any solid foundation you need to seriously consider scrapping this site and either implementing a ready-made site-design which you can use thru a CMS or paying for professional designers to make a decent site for use.
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Old 30-01-2006, 18:30   #10 (permalink)
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I can see you have put a lot of work into this site, these guys are a bit rough I feel.

No it is not great design, yes you have a long way to go to get to an acceptable standard.

Yes you would probably be better off paying a designer in the short term as this site will not attract business or do you justice (if the site looks old fashioned and amateur what will the kitchens look like?).

Keep at it though, practice makes perfect. Perhaps start again. Look at other sites in your industry. What makes them look good/or bad. Incorporate what you learn in version 2.
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Old 30-01-2006, 18:32   #11 (permalink)
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Hi Natalie

The main issue with your site is that it lacks a structure of the content, which is marred by inconsistant navigation. and no, a dropdown menu does NOT cut it!

If you haven't got the UI fundementals right then the dated and unfocused design and poor code are merely asides.

However, as datahound said, it does look like you've put alot of time and effort into this site and for what I'm presuming is a first attempt, you could of produced something far worse. Stick with it, take all the experience you've gained from make this site, and really think about making a site that reflects the quality and usability of the product your selling.

Good luck!

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Old 30-01-2006, 21:39   #12 (permalink)
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I think that sums up the code.

Absolutely terrible site - design is all over the place & the code is worse.

You're looking at starting from scratch.
God, that looks like what I have to contend with at work. Only worse.
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Old 31-01-2006, 05:02   #13 (permalink)
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Hi,
thanks for all your comments/suggestions, there's some helpful stuff. Will definitely bear it in mind, however, I should have mentioned that we are very SEO conscious and believe its important to have good design but avoid comprimising our rankings. We are aware of a lot of the design downfalls of the site but these are unavoidable due to maintaining our sites' high ranking in search engines. Do any of you have tips improving the site design-wise without comprimising the SEO?
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Old 31-01-2006, 05:04   #14 (permalink)
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Unlucky Natalie,

You've unfortunately become the brunt of some accomplished designers hatred for bad code, poor design and an awful awful site overall.

However If what I suspect is correct (this is your first site, or your a beginner), keep your chin up, this forum can be quite unforgiving to newbies. We all must start somewhere. Take into consideration some of the constructive comments (datahound, max h)and rightly said re-create a new version AFTER looking at your competitors.

Looking at sites that give advice and basic tutorials on bettering your coding skills is an absolute must!! If you do not, all bets will be off on how long you actually last with dignity intact with a site like that...it is very very poor but its your first site (I hope) so mush on, you can improve...bigtime!...

...you had better for your sake!!

Good luck! (being nice today!)
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Old 31-01-2006, 05:21   #15 (permalink)
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1997 called—they want their website back.


If your concerned about your SEO you might want to take a look at the site again against some of the ranking sites for your keywords.

The phrase fitted kitchens appears 29 times in your visible text, which is extremely high compared to the ranking sites - twice in your header tags (old SEO wives tale) - and an amazing 119 times in your reference tags.

Compared to moben (#1 ranked site on google) the keyphrase fitted kitchens appears on your page a total of 160 times on your front page compared to once on mobens page. Whilst the word kitchen appears 230 times on your page compared to 8 on mobens site.

This is what a search engine spider will see:

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This is called keyword stuffing, also known as search engine spamming.

Anyway, could go on all day but Ive got work to do.

Just my $0.02

Lyndon

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Old 31-01-2006, 11:00   #16 (permalink)
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Hi,
thanks for all your comments/suggestions, there's some helpful stuff. Will definitely bear it in mind, however, I should have mentioned that we are very SEO conscious and believe its important to have good design but avoid comprimising our rankings. We are aware of a lot of the design downfalls of the site but these are unavoidable due to maintaining our sites' high ranking in search engines. Do any of you have tips improving the site design-wise without comprimising the SEO?

A modern, standards-based design with separation between semantics, behaviour and styling is a search-engine's friend. (If the content speaks for itself without styling, it speaks for itself to a search engine).

Most of the design downfalls in the site are actively harming your SEO.
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Old 31-01-2006, 11:22   #17 (permalink)
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<iframe id=hi MAX H name="indexiframe" src="homepage.htm" width="800" height="700" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" topmargin="0" leftmargin="0" horizontalscroll="no"></iframe>
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Old 01-02-2006, 04:44   #18 (permalink)
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Most of the design downfalls in the site are actively harming your SEO.

Thanks for your comments. Could you elaborate on the above?
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