Old 28-01-2006, 03:27   #1 (permalink)
wolverinejoe80
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check my works

here is my work portfolio. no explanation on my works yet.

http://www-personal.umich.edu/~cjchung/jcdesign.htm

jewelry design, painting, and photoshop works coming very soon.

my flash site is coming soon. but whatever i do, it looks like a crap



give me some feedback.

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Old 28-01-2006, 10:07   #2 (permalink)
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Like the work. The first sculpture is my favorite. It reminds of that game kids used to play with string - making patterns with string between their hands. Anyway, it made the trees look playful and gave them some human characteristics.

Anyway, on the site...too much scrolling! Either fewer works/shots or use thumbnails. "View Source" was a mistake I won't make again, but no more of that.
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Old 28-01-2006, 12:55   #3 (permalink)
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Your graphics work seems to be very samey in the context of similarity also I feel it isn't particularly clear what exactly this graphics work is for/ purpose.. I’m making assumption it's some sort of flyer/ web work I hope this is correct?

I feel the site would benefit if you had descriptions for the graphics work simple one liners just to convey the purpose maybe a brief explanation or the creative thought behind it.

I think if you did the same with all three medias, graphics, sculpture and model just gave a brief explanation behind the work or what it's intended is for that would really help to understand a bit better you gotta remember we don't know you we have no idea why produced this work or how you did it really give us some insight.

I say it a thousand times regarding hotmail addresses on personal portfolio sites and be as it may, depends what your intentions are for the site I think hotmail addresses really put an unprofessional downer on p-sites, email hosting for just a @ domain.co.uk/com address is cheap as chips it really would just give it an edge.

I do agree with pgo in the terms of scrolling for the actual site i think you would be better with smaller thumbnails images which link to larger version keeping the scrolling to a minium.

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here is my work portfolio.

i just made it today.
http://www-personal.umich.edu/~cjchung/jcdesign.htm

jewelry design, painting, and photoshop works coming very soon.

my flash site is coming soon. but whatever i do, it looks like a crap



give me some feedback.

ths
joe
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Old 29-01-2006, 00:16   #4 (permalink)
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ths fellas

i just made is couple of days ago, so i didn't write the explanation yet. i'll update and explain what i did shortly.
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Old 29-01-2006, 02:04   #5 (permalink)
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yea some of them look sweet kind of need more info to give a better critique.
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