Old 23-01-2006, 12:36   #1 (permalink)
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please crit

just some rough poster ideas for a production of vagina monologues.
please help..

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Old 23-01-2006, 12:59   #2 (permalink)
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Not really sure a heart is really a good representative logo for the vagina monologues.
At the performance I went to last year, they were selling badges with some of the more choice quotes on which looked really good and represented the diversity of the show.

As for the above, probably 4?
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Old 23-01-2006, 13:11   #3 (permalink)
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agreed 4, not sure though
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Old 23-01-2006, 13:16   #4 (permalink)
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Any other text to be used? How might that be incorporated?
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Old 23-01-2006, 14:08   #5 (permalink)
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i know, i wasnt to sure about the hearts, dates and times need to be added as well..
see, i havent been able to find out that much about the actual show thats going to be held here, so its been really hard. What kind of promotional stuff where they using at the show u went to see.
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Old 23-01-2006, 19:18   #6 (permalink)
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How about a big charicature of a vagina. A talking vagina alone on stage. Very literal.

In all seriousness, I like #4, but I think that your design should have more to do with the title.

Vagina - female, feminine, sex, etc.
Monologue - solo, alone, speech, etc.

The single heart image does a better job of implying the "monologue" part and it only barely works - hearts = Valentine's Day = romance = sex = vaginas!
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Old 24-01-2006, 04:16   #7 (permalink)
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the heart shape has been used in the past to represent a vagina (just cant remember for what tho'). I do remember seeing someone cut up an old brown rug in a heart shape - didnt so much represent as look like a vagina. Not subtle but still worked.
I'd go for something like that to add a bit of texture and (as MaxH said) add some quotes over the top
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Old 24-01-2006, 17:18   #8 (permalink)
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I'm mainly joking, but it's not actually a bad idea - looks like a fanny, and a heart.
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Old 24-01-2006, 17:35   #9 (permalink)
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Having worked in a huge bookstore for one of the major players in that industry, I would say number 5 as it has more rep (multiple monologues = mulitple fannys/hearts). Also more imposing and more recognisible on the shelf.
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Old 30-01-2006, 17:27   #10 (permalink)
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make the heart also look like a bagina. ive seen it before its the hottness!
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Old 30-01-2006, 17:28   #11 (permalink)
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is #5 missing the i in bagina?
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Old 31-01-2006, 04:51   #12 (permalink)
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why not cut a big gash down the front of your poster?
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Old 31-01-2006, 13:44   #13 (permalink)
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yeah what cuntona said! nice big gash. so big you can clap your hands inside it!!!
aaah. i hate mondays.
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Old 31-01-2006, 13:47   #14 (permalink)
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what is your concept behind the heart? is it coming out around valentines day? maybe make the v in vagina look like a bagina? i dont know come on man.

design is a good idea.
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