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Jen · 18-01-2006, 11:31

www.cenix.com.au - new design, I wanted simple and clean. Will upload more works..

Critique welcome

d*d · 18-01-2006, 11:37

Very nice, lets the work speak for itself.

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Cenix is providing custom Graphic and Web designs for small businesses, corporations and other business groups.

For agency who need team involved to work with other international studios or projects require special skills. I am currently available for freelance work.

you may need to tidy up the english a bit, it lets the site down a bit

pgo · 18-01-2006, 11:42

Very nice in every way. Proof-read a bit more, though, as d*d said.

emil · 18-01-2006, 11:50

Site looks ok, I like the print work

adras · 18-01-2006, 11:53

Elite.

stevo · 18-01-2006, 11:54

Site reminds me of another site, in a big way –*canna mind what the site is though???

finbarr · 18-01-2006, 11:55

nice work/nice site... let down severely by your grammar/spelling.

No excuse for it... run it by a mate. Once thats sorted you'll have a pretty sweet portfolio there.

PS: Dont understand why the identity link is the only one of the category links that works... nor why it takes you to a completely different page?

hlulu · 18-01-2006, 11:55

Print works are cool. I don't like the websites though.

mx · 18-01-2006, 12:20

Very nice portfolio. like the laytout/ colours.

I like the print work alot. sadly the websites look a bit too templatey for me. not bad, just not great.

As finbarr said, the identity link taking you to another page seems like an afterthought.
And why have you got #hash links? if they don't go anywhwre they shouldn't be links.

You shouldn't have 2 H1 tags. especailly as you haven't got any H2's, but you have got H3's, which I believe is unsemantic.

Still 2 thumbs up!

Jen · 21-01-2006, 12:00

Okay I will rid off the 'upload image related' templates (they're old) because you don't like them. The other webs are nice so leave them. Sorry for confused with category links.. It'll divide my work into sections after php is 100% completed.

Thanks for critique guys!! Will fix asap, glad you like my print works.

paulanthony · 21-01-2006, 15:40

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Originally Posted by stevo

Site reminds me of another site, in a big way –*canna mind what the site is though???

agreed, cant put my finger on it tho - think cam posted summit like this before?

pgo · 21-01-2006, 16:58

I think it's a fairly common "graphic designer" style.

davidvesty · 24-01-2006, 08:52

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Originally Posted by pgo

I think it's a fairly common "graphic designer" style.

I think you mean its been copied!

oli · 24-01-2006, 09:06

Like it, nice

vinodpillai · 24-01-2006, 10:49

the spread sheet way, i like it

jthomas · 24-01-2006, 16:21

like it!

ilostmypassword · 25-01-2006, 06:13

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Originally Posted by stevo

Site reminds me of another site, in a big way –*canna mind what the site is though???

Kinda reminds me of http://www.phunkstudio.com/phunk_folder/indexA.html

Chloe · 26-01-2006, 16:15

Nice design and I really like your print work. Great choice of colors, it's easy to the eyes and the text is readable. Well done!

_____________________________________
Offset Printing
"One of the easiest to use online printing sites"

finbarr · 27-01-2006, 05:15

are you aware that you've been showcased/featured on css mania?:

http://www.nv30.com/mt/blogomania/2006_01.php?page=2

congrats

Jen · 01-02-2006, 13:09

ilostmypassword, phunkstudio doesn't look quite alike mine. I know its your opinion. However, I know there are many sites have layouts like mine. It's just I like clean, long scrolling, divide my works into section and 1 page.

finbarr, yeah I found that link in awstat :P I was surprised that my site is on showcase. Cheers.

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Jen Design is my obsession™ Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 41	Release portfolio in public www.cenix.com.au - new design, I wanted simple and clean. Will upload more works.. Critique welcome

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18-01-2006, 11:42	#3 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Very nice in every way. Proof-read a bit more, though, as d*d said.

18-01-2006, 11:50	#4 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 7,588	Site looks ok, I like the print work

18-01-2006, 11:54	#6 (permalink)
stevo Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Glasgow, Scotland Posts: 357	Site reminds me of another site, in a big way –*canna mind what the site is though???

18-01-2006, 11:55	#7 (permalink)
finbarr who the fuck am i? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: london Posts: 2,686	nice work/nice site... let down severely by your grammar/spelling. No excuse for it... run it by a mate. Once thats sorted you'll have a pretty sweet portfolio there. PS: Dont understand why the identity link is the only one of the category links that works... nor why it takes you to a completely different page?

18-01-2006, 11:55	#8 (permalink)
hlulu wyh prooffread? Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ananindeua Posts: 50	Print works are cool. I don't like the websites though.

18-01-2006, 12:20	#9 (permalink)
mx fucksocks™ Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: in the boosh Posts: 1,632	Very nice portfolio. like the laytout/ colours. I like the print work alot. sadly the websites look a bit too templatey for me. not bad, just not great. As finbarr said, the identity link taking you to another page seems like an afterthought. And why have you got #hash links? if they don't go anywhwre they shouldn't be links. You shouldn't have 2 H1 tags. especailly as you haven't got any H2's, but you have got H3's, which I believe is unsemantic. Still 2 thumbs up!

21-01-2006, 12:00	#10 (permalink)
Jen Design is my obsession™ Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 41	Okay I will rid off the 'upload image related' templates (they're old) because you don't like them. The other webs are nice so leave them. Sorry for confused with category links.. It'll divide my work into sections after php is 100% completed. Thanks for critique guys!! Will fix asap, glad you like my print works.

21-01-2006, 16:58	#12 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	I think it's a fairly common "graphic designer" style.

24-01-2006, 09:06	#14 (permalink)
oli Low flying star™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester, England.™ Posts: 10,018	Like it, nice

24-01-2006, 10:49	#15 (permalink)
vinodpillai overslide Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Bombay, India Posts: 57	the spread sheet way, i like it

24-01-2006, 16:21	#16 (permalink)
jthomas coffee is not a crime Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Illinois, USA Posts: 455	like it!

26-01-2006, 16:15	#18 (permalink)
Chloe Registered User Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 5	Nice design and I really like your print work. Great choice of colors, it's easy to the eyes and the text is readable. Well done! _____________________________________ Offset Printing "One of the easiest to use online printing sites"

27-01-2006, 05:15	#19 (permalink)
finbarr who the fuck am i? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: london Posts: 2,686	are you aware that you've been showcased/featured on css mania?: http://www.nv30.com/mt/blogomania/2006_01.php?page=2 congrats

01-02-2006, 13:09	#20 (permalink)
Jen Design is my obsession™ Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 41	ilostmypassword, phunkstudio doesn't look quite alike mine. I know its your opinion. However, I know there are many sites have layouts like mine. It's just I like clean, long scrolling, divide my works into section and 1 page. finbarr, yeah I found that link in awstat :P I was surprised that my site is on showcase. Cheers.

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