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volkswagen yellow & gold
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: london, england.
Posts: 6,147
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who are your target market? Quote:
that flash 'thing' doesn't make sense. read it yourself and tell me what it means. the typography in it is terrible. if you're going to give a message such prominent white space, at least make it pertinent to your market and make sense. the first bit of copy on the site is about building a sitemap. is that really what your intended audeince will want to read about? and who gives a monkey's about google sitemaps in xml? why is it such a prominent feature on your home page? there's too many things on there that have been 'plonked' (and yes, that is a technical term) on just to fill space it seems. print this page - i've already got a fucking print button in my browser. the copyright notice is from 2004. i don't like those arrow animated gifs. they're really distracting. the body copy changes from page to page in positioning, colour, size and format. i like continuity. this seems a little disjointed. what's with the apple? i do like the models representing the online build process. |
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volkswagen yellow & gold
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: london, england.
Posts: 6,147
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there's a superb paragraph of bullshit on this page: http://www.bdimedia.com/about.htm 'once upon a time....' etc - what a load of cock. if you're targeting local markets then don't write your copy like you're international superstars. |
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Registered User
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 10
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Did I say Constructive ?????
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WOT A CROCK OF FEEDBACK.....................Obviously on the verge of a nervous breakdown............calm !!!! |
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volkswagen yellow & gold
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: london, england.
Posts: 6,147
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volkswagen yellow & gold
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: london, england.
Posts: 6,147
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validation means cock-all if its not functional in the first place. you seem to know this from the copy on your site. don't start throwing toys around, take note of good, free advice. if you want someone to say it's all good then ask your mum. |
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I Ain't Losing Any Sleep™
Join Date: Apr 2003
Posts: 5,200
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seriously dude, you are mental. your code is shocking, the 'design' is all over the place, and the copy is laughable. constructive feedback went out the window. you're a cock. oh, and mr brown. incase you haven't seen it before Quote:
http://www.pingmag.jp/2005/12/09/the...pment-process/ |
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volkswagen yellow & gold
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: london, england.
Posts: 6,147
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2005
Posts: 12,340
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Valid XHTML is meaningless unless you know how to write good code. Case in point (CSS off): ![]() What are those? Dashes to create borders? |
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