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CID385 · 10-01-2006, 15:17

my first site. need critiques

http://cid.wbbhost4u.com

thanks

Accurate · 10-01-2006, 15:37

Good for first site, weldone.

A bit colourless though.

mx · 10-01-2006, 16:06

layout is ok.
text is hard to read.
needs more colour, not enough contrast.

bad coding:
uses tables.
uses frames
breaks up in safari.

and NO GOOGLE ADS!!!!!!!

never the less very good for a first site!

pgo · 10-01-2006, 18:05

What he said.

emil · 11-01-2006, 02:31

What they said, plus

- the downloads section points to other websites. I don't get it.
- you're selling designs but have nothing in your portfolio. Do something about that.
- the tutorials pages open in a new window.
- you have tutorials about using CSS, yet the only styles on your website define scrollbars and links. Something's fishy. Did you actually write them, or just copied them from elsewhere.
- PHP tutorials, but no contact form?
- the contact link text does not match your actual e-mail address. What happens if I type your e-mail in my e-mail client instead of clicking the link? You lose a potential client.
- Nobody wants to see your statistics.

I know the feeling, you have a website and want to do a lot with it, try to stay focused though.
It's better than my first website, too.
Keep it up

pgo · 11-01-2006, 03:56

Yet another "This is my first site. I'm a web designer - hire me!"

CID385 · 11-01-2006, 13:36

oh shit you got me... okay this is the site that i use only for adsense... it's not my first site...and i put the content on in about 5 minutes...

pat · 11-01-2006, 14:28

smell something?

davidvesty · 12-01-2006, 04:51

horrible!

10-01-2006, 15:17	#1 (permalink)
CID385 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 3	Check please... my first site. need critiques http://cid.wbbhost4u.com thanks

10-01-2006, 15:37	#2 (permalink)
Accurate Accurate Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: UK Posts: 1,158	Good for first site, weldone. A bit colourless though. __________________ decent web hosting - www.balue.com

11-01-2006, 02:31	#5 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 6,830	What they said, plus - the downloads section points to other websites. I don't get it. - you're selling designs but have nothing in your portfolio. Do something about that. - the tutorials pages open in a new window. - you have tutorials about using CSS, yet the only styles on your website define scrollbars and links. Something's fishy. Did you actually write them, or just copied them from elsewhere. - PHP tutorials, but no contact form? - the contact link text does not match your actual e-mail address. What happens if I type your e-mail in my e-mail client instead of clicking the link? You lose a potential client. - Nobody wants to see your statistics. I know the feeling, you have a website and want to do a lot with it, try to stay focused though. It's better than my first website, too. Keep it up Last edited by emil : 12-01-2006 at 02:52.

11-01-2006, 14:28	#8 (permalink)
pat jorge regula Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: B'ham/Leeds Posts: 4,820	smell something? __________________

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10-01-2006, 16:06	#3 (permalink)
mx fucksocks™ Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: in the boosh Posts: 1,615	layout is ok. text is hard to read. needs more colour, not enough contrast. bad coding: uses tables. uses frames breaks up in safari. and NO GOOGLE ADS!!!!!!! never the less very good for a first site!

10-01-2006, 18:05	#4 (permalink)
pgo i'm done, son Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,262	What he said.

11-01-2006, 03:56	#6 (permalink)
pgo i'm done, son Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,262	Yet another "This is my first site. I'm a web designer - hire me!"

11-01-2006, 13:36	#7 (permalink)
CID385 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 3	oh shit you got me... okay this is the site that i use only for adsense... it's not my first site...and i put the content on in about 5 minutes...

12-01-2006, 04:51	#9 (permalink)
davidvesty KryCek Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Preston Posts: 124	horrible!

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