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kaff · 06-10-2005, 07:12

Got this illustration assignment here at Monash in Melbourne. We were to illustrate a lyric, or a part of a lyric, and this is what i came up with.
My part is: "Sweet like candy, yeah I can be / Fake your beauty"

What thinks?

aspiramedia · 06-10-2005, 09:43

The tail needs to have backwards pointing barbs - or it will just look like an arrow.

kaff · 06-10-2005, 10:05

Yeah, have fixed that. Here's my final one.

aspiramedia · 06-10-2005, 10:14

Would like to see a bigger end of tail too. Sorry!

kaff · 06-10-2005, 10:20

Now then?

aspiramedia · 07-10-2005, 06:41

Yeah.

ZenElements · 07-10-2005, 10:39

what program did you use for your good bad girl?

Personally I don't like it, creeps me out a bit but as I'm not a huge illustrator... I won't asy anything more.

Rakan · 07-10-2005, 10:53

I didn't notice the tail or the horns much... Maybe make the horns a bit bigger? I don't like the background much though... maybe add some more detail? Just my 2 cents...

... nice work though. creepy

kaff · 07-10-2005, 12:14

I used Adobe Illustrator.

Hehe, it's supposed to be creepy, a mischiefful girl acting nice.
The tails and horns aren't supposed to be THAT dominant, i originally wanted her facial expression to deliver the message, the tail and horns are just to enforce it.

pgo · 07-10-2005, 16:04

Quote:

Originally Posted by kaff

mischiefful

Mischievous.

Rakan · 07-10-2005, 19:17

Quote:

Originally Posted by kaff

I used Adobe Illustrator.

Hehe, it's supposed to be creepy, a mischiefful girl acting nice.
The tails and horns aren't supposed to be THAT dominant, i originally wanted her facial expression to deliver the message, the tail and horns are just to enforce it.

that's cool... does the trick... i get what you mean about the horns and tail... when I think about it like that, then yeah, the expression on her face really delivers it...

good work

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kaff Menace Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 36	Good bad girl Got this illustration assignment here at Monash in Melbourne. We were to illustrate a lyric, or a part of a lyric, and this is what i came up with. My part is: "Sweet like candy, yeah I can be / Fake your beauty" What thinks? Last edited by kaff : 02-05-2008 at 03:28.

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kaff Menace Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 36	Yeah, have fixed that. Here's my final one. Last edited by kaff : 02-05-2008 at 03:28.

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kaff Menace Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 36	Now then? Last edited by kaff : 02-05-2008 at 03:28.

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06-10-2005, 09:43	#2 (permalink)
aspiramedia Unregistered user Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 312	The tail needs to have backwards pointing barbs - or it will just look like an arrow.

06-10-2005, 10:14	#4 (permalink)
aspiramedia Unregistered user Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 312	Would like to see a bigger end of tail too. Sorry!

07-10-2005, 06:41	#6 (permalink)
aspiramedia Unregistered user Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 312	Yeah.

07-10-2005, 10:39	#7 (permalink)
ZenElements Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Scotland Posts: 66	what program did you use for your good bad girl? Personally I don't like it, creeps me out a bit but as I'm not a huge illustrator... I won't asy anything more.

07-10-2005, 10:53	#8 (permalink)
Rakan Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 567	I didn't notice the tail or the horns much... Maybe make the horns a bit bigger? I don't like the background much though... maybe add some more detail? Just my 2 cents... ... nice work though. creepy

07-10-2005, 12:14	#9 (permalink)
kaff Menace Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 36	I used Adobe Illustrator. Hehe, it's supposed to be creepy, a mischiefful girl acting nice. The tails and horns aren't supposed to be THAT dominant, i originally wanted her facial expression to deliver the message, the tail and horns are just to enforce it.

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