Old 05-10-2005, 21:14   #1 (permalink)
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Very Simple Site

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Old 05-10-2005, 21:26   #2 (permalink)
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Some of the stuff is not bad at all but I can't understand the use of that peach/beige colour against the white. It's annoyingly hard to read.
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Old 05-10-2005, 23:28   #3 (permalink)
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thats kinda cool, simple as shit.
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Old 06-10-2005, 00:10   #4 (permalink)
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think the color is fine
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Old 06-10-2005, 02:59   #5 (permalink)
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Can't see it for shit.

Like it otherwise.
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Old 06-10-2005, 04:02   #6 (permalink)
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I can read it...
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Old 06-10-2005, 04:52   #7 (permalink)
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Hmmm... perhaps I should address the beige... Thanks for the comments guys and not being mean on my first time out!
D'ya think it needs to be more stylised or more descriptive info?
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Old 06-10-2005, 06:14   #8 (permalink)
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I like it.
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Old 06-10-2005, 06:18   #9 (permalink)
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Dont like the site, very heard to see.
Love the work though, reminding me of Bureau Destruct.
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Old 06-10-2005, 06:19   #10 (permalink)
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Nice and simple but change the beige. Its well hard to read.

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Old 06-10-2005, 06:36   #11 (permalink)
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imo all it needs is the beige colour darkening a bit - just to make it readable. Cool works tho
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Old 06-10-2005, 07:06   #12 (permalink)
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same as most here - like the work but the siet is kind of hard to read. Just that orange on white
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Old 06-10-2005, 10:35   #13 (permalink)
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i think you could find a more obvious place for the < previous next > buttons. Maybe im just slow, but it took me a sec to realise that each section had more than one piece of work.
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Old 06-10-2005, 10:41   #14 (permalink)
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Site looks cool, but not too sure about the centralised menu.
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Old 06-10-2005, 11:21   #15 (permalink)
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but not too sure about the centralised menu.
Thats because it looks bad, it would be better ranged left, cetrally justified is harder to scan and looks messy
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Old 06-10-2005, 12:49   #16 (permalink)
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Cheers for the comments guys. Much appreciated! The beige is darker now, and more of an orange and I've left aligned the menu. When I get chance I'm gonna go back and realign everything and touch it up me thinks... Can you tell I'm not a webdesigner? Haha...

But yeah... thanks again!
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Old 06-10-2005, 15:51   #17 (permalink)
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Much better.
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Old 06-10-2005, 16:08   #18 (permalink)
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Now that you've left aligned the nav you're going to need to pad it out so it doesn't touch the edge of the screen. I'd line it up with the logo if I were you.

Top illustrations BTW.
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Old 07-10-2005, 10:56   #19 (permalink)
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nice... simple...
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Old 07-10-2005, 11:15   #20 (permalink)
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untitled document.
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