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jase1000 · 04-10-2005, 05:24

Nothing earth shattering, just branding and layout for a manufacturer of those office divider and display stand things.

finbarr · 04-10-2005, 06:03

Its OK... I guess its the correct stye for the suject matter - just corporate enough and nothing too fancy.

My only complaint is that the body sections dont have enough padding between them. Also (being picky now) the logo should move up a few pixels so that its sitting vertically central in the header (similarly the text in the footer). And the circular discs look a little out of place

jase1000 · 04-10-2005, 06:34

Cheers Finbarr. Is this any better?

gray · 04-10-2005, 06:38

too much primary colour

jase1000 · 04-10-2005, 06:53

Here's a version with less red and green...

Alex · 04-10-2005, 06:55

feels a bit fisher price. Tone it down a bit

finbarr · 04-10-2005, 06:56

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Originally Posted by jase1000

Cheers Finbarr. Is this any better?

certainly... but you havent done anything about the padding, right? Looking at the design its going to be difficult to add padding around those coloured squares anyway.

And in a way I do agree with Gray - but its more to do with the red and green bars/buttons. Perhaps make them shades/tones of blue

Personally I dont like the design but I'm sure its what this company will be looking for. Unfortunately we all have to do these uninteresting sites for dull customers at some point.

finbarr · 04-10-2005, 06:57

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Originally Posted by jase1000

Here's a version with less red and green...

fuck... beaten to it

jase1000 · 04-10-2005, 07:11

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Originally Posted by finbarr

fuck... beaten to it

Ha Ha... At least you know you were right

I reckon this is good to go now. Thanks a lot for your input guys.

jase1000 · 04-10-2005, 07:18

Okay, I think this is the version I'm going to put in front of the client. Slightly duller green and a few minor tweaks. Thanks again.

aspiramedia · 04-10-2005, 10:13

I think getting rid of the white line below the header will do it wonders. Not much else to say though.

jase1000 · 04-10-2005, 10:40

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Originally Posted by aspiramedia

I think getting rid of the white line below the header will do it wonders. Not much else to say though.

Like this...

finbarr · 04-10-2005, 10:43

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Originally Posted by jase1000

Like this...

I'm personally not so sure about that alteration but I may be out-voted

jase1000 · 04-10-2005, 10:55

What about this?

aspiramedia · 04-10-2005, 10:59

last one actually looks best. The gap seemed to large originally.

top_buzz · 04-10-2005, 13:49

last ones best for me. 2 thumbs up!

04-10-2005, 05:24	#1 (permalink)
jase1000 turd 2.0 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Right on your tit end Posts: 1,163	Crit ma comp. Nothing earth shattering, just branding and layout for a manufacturer of those office divider and display stand things. Attached Thumbnails

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jase1000 turd 2.0 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Right on your tit end Posts: 1,163	Cheers Finbarr. Is this any better? Attached Thumbnails

04-10-2005, 06:53	#5 (permalink)
jase1000 turd 2.0 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Right on your tit end Posts: 1,163	Here's a version with less red and green... Attached Thumbnails

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Alex div Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Leeds Posts: 646	feels a bit fisher price. Tone it down a bit __________________ Engage Interactive - Web design Harrogate \| Kustard

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jase1000 turd 2.0 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Right on your tit end Posts: 1,163	Okay, I think this is the version I'm going to put in front of the client. Slightly duller green and a few minor tweaks. Thanks again. Attached Thumbnails

04-10-2005, 06:03	#2 (permalink)
finbarr who the fuck am i? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: london Posts: 2,686	Its OK... I guess its the correct stye for the suject matter - just corporate enough and nothing too fancy. My only complaint is that the body sections dont have enough padding between them. Also (being picky now) the logo should move up a few pixels so that its sitting vertically central in the header (similarly the text in the footer). And the circular discs look a little out of place

04-10-2005, 06:38	#4 (permalink)
gray i still want paying Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: newcastle, uk Posts: 4,842	too much primary colour

04-10-2005, 10:13	#11 (permalink)
aspiramedia Unregistered user Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 312	I think getting rid of the white line below the header will do it wonders. Not much else to say though.

04-10-2005, 10:55	#14 (permalink)
jase1000 turd 2.0 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Right on your tit end Posts: 1,163	What about this? Attached Thumbnails

04-10-2005, 10:59	#15 (permalink)
aspiramedia Unregistered user Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 312	last one actually looks best. The gap seemed to large originally.

04-10-2005, 13:49	#16 (permalink)
top_buzz For your health! Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 2,588	last ones best for me. 2 thumbs up!

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