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flatcat · 04-10-2005, 05:03

Yo, it's been a while since I've posted anything, but I'm looking for some opinions from some of the more experienced folk. The club is looking to be launching around Oct. 21 (most likely will be the 28th the way the contractors are going right now), and I'm currently working on developing all their non-video stuff. I'm in a bit of a disagreement with the promotions manager atm over the invite though. I tried to develop the invite along the same guidelines that I developed the business card and dinner certificate (both attached as well), but he wants to scrap the guidelines for the invite and put the text center-aligned as is traditional for invites, and I was wondering what y'all thought.

In addition, there is going to be major text revisions done because I know the copy is quite shite as it is right now, just needed something in there to fill the space until I get the final wording. And the lovely Ms. Beckinsale will be replaced by a shot of the club when it's finished renovations.

In addition I'm taking comments and critiques on all the designs if you feel so obliged.

finbarr · 04-10-2005, 05:11

very nice I have to say. Love the colours. Admittedly the text is quite small at the bottom but the font itself doesnt look bad

pgo · 04-10-2005, 05:12

The invite (middle) feels a bit off and I think it's due to the picture of the woman. The spacing of the different elements is basically the same on each - but that picture seems to throw off the balance of the rest of the invite.

I like them, though.

Alexanda · 04-10-2005, 05:13

Keep the invite like the rest of it.

ZenElements · 04-10-2005, 12:48

Love the design, like the colours but text it not very easily read... 'THE BANK' especially.

I prefer the middle design out of them all and the image of the woman bottem left probably has something to do with that, one she is pretty but two, it gives something to an otherwise quite plain design.

flatcat · 04-10-2005, 13:50

pgo: I'll look into it, this was the dimension they gave me for the certificate though, and it's just too big for such a small bit of text. I'll revisit the certificate though.

cantona: that's what I was thinking, just going to have to try to sell the bastard on it now... *sigh*

Thnx for the comments and critiques, I'll be posting more stuff to this thread as it gets developed.

Cheers.

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flatcat Balinese Buddah Sensei Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Vancouver, British Columbia Posts: 808	Branding for a New Lounge.... Yo, it's been a while since I've posted anything, but I'm looking for some opinions from some of the more experienced folk. The club is looking to be launching around Oct. 21 (most likely will be the 28th the way the contractors are going right now), and I'm currently working on developing all their non-video stuff. I'm in a bit of a disagreement with the promotions manager atm over the invite though. I tried to develop the invite along the same guidelines that I developed the business card and dinner certificate (both attached as well), but he wants to scrap the guidelines for the invite and put the text center-aligned as is traditional for invites, and I was wondering what y'all thought. In addition, there is going to be major text revisions done because I know the copy is quite shite as it is right now, just needed something in there to fill the space until I get the final wording. And the lovely Ms. Beckinsale will be replaced by a shot of the club when it's finished renovations. In addition I'm taking comments and critiques on all the designs if you feel so obliged. Attached Thumbnails __________________ audentes fortuna iuvat Flatcat

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flatcat Balinese Buddah Sensei Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Vancouver, British Columbia Posts: 808	pgo: I'll look into it, this was the dimension they gave me for the certificate though, and it's just too big for such a small bit of text. I'll revisit the certificate though. cantona: that's what I was thinking, just going to have to try to sell the bastard on it now... sigh Thnx for the comments and critiques, I'll be posting more stuff to this thread as it gets developed. Cheers. __________________ audentes fortuna iuvat Flatcat

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04-10-2005, 05:11	#2 (permalink)
finbarr who the fuck am i? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: london Posts: 2,686	very nice I have to say. Love the colours. Admittedly the text is quite small at the bottom but the font itself doesnt look bad

04-10-2005, 05:12	#3 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	The invite (middle) feels a bit off and I think it's due to the picture of the woman. The spacing of the different elements is basically the same on each - but that picture seems to throw off the balance of the rest of the invite. I like them, though.

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Alexanda European Champions 2008 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 2,590	Keep the invite like the rest of it.

04-10-2005, 12:48	#5 (permalink)
ZenElements Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Scotland Posts: 66	Love the design, like the colours but text it not very easily read... 'THE BANK' especially. I prefer the middle design out of them all and the image of the woman bottem left probably has something to do with that, one she is pretty but two, it gives something to an otherwise quite plain design.

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