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Rakan · 03-10-2005, 17:31

One thing must be made clear... this is just a mockup... just a little design I've been playing around with tonight, so don't take it too seriously... just wondering what everything thinks of the general idea...

thanks a lot for your time

ZenElements · 03-10-2005, 17:37

As a 'mockup' messaround thing, it is not to bad. I would say that the RAKAN text should be more inline with the other texts and that is about it from me.

I like it,

briljant oranje · 03-10-2005, 17:45

i like the idea.

jase1000 · 03-10-2005, 18:09

There's an optical illusion because of the slant on the bottom of the 'Rakan' text which spoils it. Nice enough idea tho'.

Brown · 03-10-2005, 18:10

glad to see there's room for a blog in there. just what this internet needs right now...

Rakan · 03-10-2005, 18:13

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Originally Posted by Brown

glad to see there's room for a blog in there. just what this internet needs right now...

well how else am i supposed to waste people's time with useless ranting about my own personal ideas?

Rakan · 03-10-2005, 18:16

the rakan text will have better shadows... i'm trying to get it to look like it comes out from the background... but i see what you mean by the illusion... looks kinda crooked...

adras · 03-10-2005, 22:49

'i make websites.' the 'i' should be capitalized.

Alexanda · 04-10-2005, 04:34

lose the reflective shadow

finbarr · 04-10-2005, 04:55

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Originally Posted by cantona

lose the reflective shadow

disagree... just make the bottom edge of Rakan horizontal and line it up with the bottom of the 'I make...' Then you can work on the reflection/shadows of Rakan to suit

pgo · 04-10-2005, 05:14

Either way would be acceptable, but you can't have a reflection on one and not the other. Also, the reflection isn't transparent enough. If I were you - and keeping the reflection - I'd drop the transparency of that layer down quite a bit. Just a hint - if anything.

Rakan · 04-10-2005, 05:33

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Originally Posted by adras

'i make websites.' the 'i' should be capitalized.

i was going for lower caps, everything except "RAKAN" is lowercase...

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Rakan Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 567	Opinions on this mock... One thing must be made clear... this is just a mockup... just a little design I've been playing around with tonight, so don't take it too seriously... just wondering what everything thinks of the general idea... thanks a lot for your time

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03-10-2005, 17:37	#2 (permalink)
ZenElements Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Scotland Posts: 66	As a 'mockup' messaround thing, it is not to bad. I would say that the RAKAN text should be more inline with the other texts and that is about it from me. I like it,

03-10-2005, 17:45	#3 (permalink)
briljant oranje Keep it foolish yeah? Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Not Leeds Posts: 579	i like the idea.

03-10-2005, 18:09	#4 (permalink)
jase1000 turd 2.0 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Right on your tit end Posts: 1,163	There's an optical illusion because of the slant on the bottom of the 'Rakan' text which spoils it. Nice enough idea tho'.

03-10-2005, 18:10	#5 (permalink)
Brown volkswagen yellow & gold Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: london, england. Posts: 6,147	glad to see there's room for a blog in there. just what this internet needs right now...

03-10-2005, 18:16	#7 (permalink)
Rakan Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 567	the rakan text will have better shadows... i'm trying to get it to look like it comes out from the background... but i see what you mean by the illusion... looks kinda crooked...

04-10-2005, 04:34	#9 (permalink)
Alexanda European Champions 2008 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 2,590	lose the reflective shadow

04-10-2005, 05:14	#11 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Either way would be acceptable, but you can't have a reflection on one and not the other. Also, the reflection isn't transparent enough. If I were you - and keeping the reflection - I'd drop the transparency of that layer down quite a bit. Just a hint - if anything.

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