Web Design Forums

MikeTC · 03-09-2005, 12:04

For an executive dry cleaning service. Do they speak professional, quality service?
Or are they a bit wishy washy... hohoho....

paulanthony · 03-09-2005, 12:23

Im liking number 4 best..

MikeTC · 03-09-2005, 13:33

Cheers Paulanthony!
Here's some more abysmal attempts with that type...

I'm still not sure the heaviness of the type says classy though?

pgo · 03-09-2005, 15:09

Taking some inspiration from Westinghouse, eh?

Looks alright. I agree that the heavier text doesn't work as well as the lighter. At the same time, I think the lighter text you have is a bit too light and is overpowered by the iconographic image.

Something in between, I'd say.

What about thinking of the circle as the window on the front of a washer - have just a level of water inside. Think it could be great.

emil · 04-09-2005, 04:20

They're nice, but I think there is too much happening, it's hard to focus on anything. Bold and light text, thick circle, thin lines... maybe go with a filled circle and have the image inside negative... to simplify a bit. dunno.

Toney · 04-09-2005, 14:33

Quote:

Originally Posted by emilpaun

They're nice, but I think there is too much happening, it's hard to focus on anything. Bold and light text, thick circle, thin lines... maybe go with a filled circle and have the image inside negative... to simplify a bit. dunno.

I THINK SO. MAKE IT SIMPLE. AND THE CIRCLE THING IS NOT CLEAR TO GET A MESSAGE.

emil · 04-09-2005, 16:11

Quote:

Originally Posted by Toney

I THINK SO. MAKE IT SIMPLE. AND THE CIRCLE THING IS NOT CLEAR TO GET A MESSAGE.

Why are you yelling?

03-09-2005, 12:04	#1 (permalink)
MikeTC Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Wirral / Chester Posts: 178	Logo:Opinions For an executive dry cleaning service. Do they speak professional, quality service? Or are they a bit wishy washy... hohoho.... Attached Thumbnails

03-09-2005, 12:23	#2 (permalink)
paulanthony mingin dawg baitch Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Belfast Posts: 1,041	Im liking number 4 best.. __________________ Web design Ireland

03-09-2005, 13:33	#3 (permalink)
MikeTC Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Wirral / Chester Posts: 178	Cheers Paulanthony! Here's some more abysmal attempts with that type... I'm still not sure the heaviness of the type says classy though? Attached Thumbnails

Thread Tools	Search this Thread
Show Printable Version Email this Page	Search this Thread: Advanced Search

03-09-2005, 15:09	#4 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Taking some inspiration from Westinghouse, eh? Looks alright. I agree that the heavier text doesn't work as well as the lighter. At the same time, I think the lighter text you have is a bit too light and is overpowered by the iconographic image. Something in between, I'd say. What about thinking of the circle as the window on the front of a washer - have just a level of water inside. Think it could be great.

04-09-2005, 04:20	#5 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 7,588	They're nice, but I think there is too much happening, it's hard to focus on anything. Bold and light text, thick circle, thin lines... maybe go with a filled circle and have the image inside negative... to simplify a bit. dunno.

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)