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belacqua · 26-09-2006, 21:43

Hello Boardies,
See link below for a mock up of a album layout I'm working on.

Album Cover

I'd appreciate any suggestions as to how to make it better... I'm pretty happy with the typography, it just seems to missing maybe another graphic element...ideas?

Thanks for your valuable time and opinions.

-Brandon

pgo · 27-09-2006, 01:04

Personally, I'd nudge that type down a bit. Feels a little close to the top edge. Just a bit though.

Also, what kind of music is it? That'd help determine if the look fits the sound.

belacqua · 27-09-2006, 01:12

pgo,
thanks for the tip. the music is indie rock (myspace.com/cristinabautista)

cocknose · 27-09-2006, 04:18

is that arial?..

adam c · 27-09-2006, 08:09

'This is the team' is not working for me.
Not keen on it all being in caps and the face doesn't sit right with the one above imo.

dtrenz · 27-09-2006, 10:17

yeah, the title was really hard for me to read

belacqua · 27-09-2006, 17:28

Thanks for the feedback guys. I appreciate it.

cocknose, it isn't arial it's news gothic printed out and then cut out of paper, so when you see it upclose you can see the subtle cut out, imperfect, slightly textured vibe.

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belacqua Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 3	Album Layout Critique Hello Boardies, See link below for a mock up of a album layout I'm working on. Album Cover I'd appreciate any suggestions as to how to make it better... I'm pretty happy with the typography, it just seems to missing maybe another graphic element...ideas? Thanks for your valuable time and opinions. -Brandon

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27-09-2006, 01:04	#2 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	Personally, I'd nudge that type down a bit. Feels a little close to the top edge. Just a bit though. Also, what kind of music is it? That'd help determine if the look fits the sound.

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belacqua Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 3	pgo, thanks for the tip. the music is indie rock (myspace.com/cristinabautista)

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cocknose Banned™ Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 3,708	is that arial?..

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adam c berserker than thou Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Bristol Posts: 450	'This is the team' is not working for me. Not keen on it all being in caps and the face doesn't sit right with the one above imo.

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dtrenz blam blam Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: ann arbor, mi usa Posts: 528	yeah, the title was really hard for me to read

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belacqua Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 3	Thanks for the feedback guys. I appreciate it. cocknose, it isn't arial it's news gothic printed out and then cut out of paper, so when you see it upclose you can see the subtle cut out, imperfect, slightly textured vibe.

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