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imrohan · 16-12-2009, 22:11

You know the drill.

Scopestyle · 17-12-2009, 04:16

What's this logo for? It would be more "monospace" if you have an M that's the same width .. but I'm not sure if that's what you're after.
Overall it looks a bit cramped, and the 1px line adds nothing.

ben. · 17-12-2009, 05:03

Not to mention the "o" and "p" are not aligned.

On a separate note, why do people post logos for critique without any relevant information - Who is the company/brand/product, what does the company/brand/product want to communicate at the very least ?

steveb · 17-12-2009, 05:35

Chopping up Helvetica is forbidden, even if it's the shitty extended version.

Really, it always looks stupid because there's never any point.

oliver13 · 07-01-2010, 05:08

when u need simple logo maybe use only mono or spaced bold to make it more interesting, also dont like the thin line, maybe bolder or some color

RobynAnn · 17-02-2010, 11:35

Or maybe you can use an underscore instead of the line, to maximize the 'space' symbol ... ie mono_spaced

But I agree, without knowing the purpose of this logo, I can't really give good insight.

16-12-2009, 22:11	#1 (permalink)
imrohan I <3 Helvetica Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 20	Design Critique You know the drill. Attached Thumbnails

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Scopestyle New vintage Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 866	What's this logo for? It would be more "monospace" if you have an M that's the same width .. but I'm not sure if that's what you're after. Overall it looks a bit cramped, and the 1px line adds nothing. __________________ keming is bad kerning

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steveb Contains nuts Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 9,909	Chopping up Helvetica is forbidden, even if it's the shitty extended version. Really, it always looks stupid because there's never any point. __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

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17-12-2009, 05:03	#3 (permalink)
ben. Join Date: May 2009 Location: Prague Posts: 253	Not to mention the "o" and "p" are not aligned. On a separate note, why do people post logos for critique without any relevant information - Who is the company/brand/product, what does the company/brand/product want to communicate at the very least ?

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oliver13 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 16	when u need simple logo maybe use only mono or spaced bold to make it more interesting, also dont like the thin line, maybe bolder or some color

17-02-2010, 11:35	#6 (permalink)
RobynAnn Eager to learn Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 17	Or maybe you can use an underscore instead of the line, to maximize the 'space' symbol ... ie mono_spaced But I agree, without knowing the purpose of this logo, I can't really give good insight.

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