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dsauna · 01-06-2009, 16:37

Hello Everyone,

This is a logo that I'm working on. Enkeli, means angel in finish. The company works with security systems. So I played with the idea of a strong angel. Any ideas suggestions?

Thanks in Advance

Scopestyle · 01-06-2009, 16:55

I think it's a nice idea, but what you made is not really working.

- Details get lost on this size .. I think I see an arm there?
- Walking angel seems a bit bored.
- The open wings seem a bit messy to be angel like, they look a bit like demonic wings to me.

Try something else, maybe less detailed but with the same perspective. - Maybe something with just wings?

dsauna · 01-06-2009, 16:59

i think you have good points there. I'll look for another solution. Thanks

HIPPY · 12-06-2009, 07:57

agreed - I like the idea but the angel does not look "angel" but more "demonic".

petra · 10-09-2009, 15:42

So this is for a security systems company... the angel looks inactive, not exactly a protector. How about showing the angel with his wings outstreched, from a frontal viewpoint? That may give a more 'watched over' presence.

Good luck. All best,

Anneska · 13-09-2009, 08:48

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Originally Posted by petra

So this is for a security systems company... the angel looks inactive, not exactly a protector. How about showing the angel with his wings outstreched, from a frontal viewpoint? That may give a more 'watched over' presence.

Good luck. All best,

I agree, maybe use a frontal view. I like the idea.

You could always try to incorporate the name and the Logo in one

Anneska · 13-09-2009, 08:48

The with serifs fonts works better, I think

Aibrean · 15-09-2009, 12:08

He looks like he needs a cane.

Rean · 17-09-2009, 09:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scopestyle

I think it's a nice idea, but what you made is not really working.

- Details get lost on this size .. I think I see an arm there?
- Walking angel seems a bit bored.
- The open wings seem a bit messy to be angel like, they look a bit like demonic wings to me.

Try something else, maybe less detailed but with the same perspective. - Maybe something with just wings?

yes he is right. i would try something more soft and compact. maybe just wings with a locker... i like the bw combination.

zie · 19-09-2009, 10:12

The male figure looks like others were saying demonic or evil.

The open wings are to mess and too much small detail for a logo.

Maybe a simple basic female angle, with a weapon to look like security.

CartoonScott · 29-11-2009, 19:37

Did you manage to alter these logos? I agree that the open wing one looked a bit more dynamic than the closed winged one, but the wings did look more demonic than angel.

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01-06-2009, 16:55	#2 (permalink)
Scopestyle New vintage Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 867	I think it's a nice idea, but what you made is not really working. - Details get lost on this size .. I think I see an arm there? - Walking angel seems a bit bored. - The open wings seem a bit messy to be angel like, they look a bit like demonic wings to me. Try something else, maybe less detailed but with the same perspective. - Maybe something with just wings?

01-06-2009, 16:59	#3 (permalink)
dsauna Registered User Join Date: May 2009 Location: Virginia, USA Posts: 9	i think you have good points there. I'll look for another solution. Thanks

12-06-2009, 07:57	#4 (permalink)
HIPPY Registered User Join Date: May 2009 Location: Staffordshire Posts: 27	agreed - I like the idea but the angel does not look "angel" but more "demonic".

10-09-2009, 15:42	#5 (permalink)
petra Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Bellingham, Washington Posts: 51	So this is for a security systems company... the angel looks inactive, not exactly a protector. How about showing the angel with his wings outstreched, from a frontal viewpoint? That may give a more 'watched over' presence. Good luck. All best,

13-09-2009, 08:48	#7 (permalink)
Anneska Student Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: South Africa Posts: 27	The with serifs fonts works better, I think

19-09-2009, 10:12	#10 (permalink)
zie Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Western U.S. Posts: 165	The male figure looks like others were saying demonic or evil. The open wings are to mess and too much small detail for a logo. Maybe a simple basic female angle, with a weapon to look like security.

29-11-2009, 19:37	#11 (permalink)
CartoonScott Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 54	Did you manage to alter these logos? I agree that the open wing one looked a bit more dynamic than the closed winged one, but the wings did look more demonic than angel.

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