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cheap student labour
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i like the idea of 2 but hate the font you've used on 1 and 2. I also really like 4. I'd maybe combine 2 and four. Somehow. But outright with no changes I'd choose 4. Also, 3 has a typo. Custom doors and winsows? If your colours are starting to run, let them all run, run away from you. Flux - Bloc Party
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Chavtastic
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: West London
Posts: 1,034
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Sorry Adras but I reckon you should get ya pencil out for 30 minutes and work through some ideas. I feel these are constucted directly in Illy, with not much thought of concept or style. Personally I would slicken it up and focus on the custom aspect of the business with a simple treatment to make them seem bespoke. |
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Doodler.
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Manchester, UK
Posts: 1,295
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Oh christ thats a lot of copy in an ident. Take him out and shoot him. Of those only 9 doesn't make my eyes bleed from the overload of type, I'd honestly suggest dropping doing anything particularly creative with the type as there's simply way too much. Would develop a mark to go with the text and simply set the text cleanly, even in 9 the type treatment has a bit too much going on it's tugging my eyes left and right and up and down. edit - infact number 4 is the cleanest and nicest copy wise - in hindsight, just needs work on what goes with it. |
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unusual suspect ™
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: DE, USA
Posts: 2,511
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What a horribly long name to have to work with for a logo. Maybe try and create something with CDWD as the mark with the actual name as a tagline or some mark that doesn't encompass the name at all in a similar vein. Don't suppose you can talk them into a new name... When I made UKGuest.com they were calling themselves guest-accommodation.co.uk so I came up with UKGuest and sold them on that, partly because I didn't want to be making a logo with such a long name, largely because branding a name is easier with something unique and memorable rather than a generic phrase. Of what you've got so far I actually think #1 fits quite well (with what I imagine the company to be) with some refinement. #2 certainly has some potential as well. I like 9 and 12 but don't think they fit. #13 suggests wind and has a crack in it - not something you would want to associate with windows. |
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