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wayneBrand · 06-03-2008, 10:03

Hi Ladies, Gents and others,

simple company logo for myself a freelance web developer specialising in PHP/mysql.

some feedback and directions please

thanx

the link: waynebrand.com/testimage2.html

pontypete · 06-03-2008, 10:07

Bevel, Shadow = NO!
Fonts = NO!
Lines = Too small and Pointless

Colours, A good combination!

Sorry, But thats constructive critisism for you (without the constructive part) lol

pontypete · 06-03-2008, 10:15

Heres something constructive for you, and you can have it,

muggd.com/work/waynebrand.jpg (ill send .ai) if you need it, also tips are welcome

lol

Paddy · 06-03-2008, 10:24

I don't like this one either. It's gotten worse.

Pete, yours is just as weak in my opinion.

If it's not a rude question, why wayneBrand when you're a developer, not a designer?

pontypete · 06-03-2008, 10:27

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paddy

why wayneBrand when you're a developer, not a designer?

Aimed at me?

and I think its simple and contempory, people have their own views, it was a matter of two minutes, look at the time between posts lol

Paddy · 06-03-2008, 10:29

Aimed at Wayne.

Don't think I'm being mean – I'm not – but that was contemporary 10 years ago. The reflection is naff and the whole thing just looks a bit rushed, which it clearly was.

pontypete · 06-03-2008, 10:34

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paddy

...the whole thing just looks a bit rushed, which it clearly was.

Yes that is true! and ok the reflection looks naff but it isnt horrible

anyways its an improvement and was made in 3/4 minutes!

wayneBrand · 06-03-2008, 10:36

Quote:

why wayneBrand when you're a developer, not a designer?

cos i have been doing a lot of overlap on private jobs so i thought i would set up a thing on the side thats why.

Pete: i have seen enough glossy 3d stuff to last a long time i thinking minimal undatable (if such a term exists)

Paddy · 06-03-2008, 10:39

Quote:

Originally Posted by wayneBrand

cos i have been doing a lot of overlap on private jobs so i thought i would set up a thing on the side thats why.

From what little I have sseen of your work I think you might be better off using a freelance designer when you have a crossover job. It'll actually make you look better.

Then again, lot's of people struggle with logos, you might be good at site design.

Do Gooder · 06-03-2008, 10:41

perhaps try something simple and consistent.. like the (very) rough attached

Do Gooder · 06-03-2008, 10:50

infact if you matched the shape of the W with the curves of the B that could look good.

Stickman · 06-03-2008, 10:51

WB makes me think Warner Bros.

pontypete · 06-03-2008, 10:52

Quote:

Originally Posted by Do Gooder

infact if you matched the shape of the W with the curves of the B that could look good.

Look at mine

Alexanda · 06-03-2008, 10:52

waynebrand.com/testimage2.html that logo is cool as fuck what you all going on about?

wayneBrand · 06-03-2008, 11:08

waynebrand.com/testimage3.html (there is two on the page)

I here what u were sayin Do Gooder but i want to use dem colours

thanx for the fb peeps keep it coming...

thanx

Maerk · 06-03-2008, 11:58

It's actually getting worse in spite of all the feedback. Impressive.

Do Gooder · 06-03-2008, 12:12

Quote:

Originally Posted by pontypete

Look at mine

sorry yours is heading way down hill!

this is what i was meaning.. again this is very very rough - but if you match the curves in the letterforms things can start to look good.

Coops · 06-03-2008, 12:16

Is this a joke thread?

Do Gooder · 06-03-2008, 12:19

WB b

wayneBrand · 06-03-2008, 12:27

ok another take and i really like this one.

waynebrand.com/testimage4.html

06-03-2008, 10:03	#1 (permalink)
wayneBrand Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 17	my company logo v2 Hi Ladies, Gents and others, simple company logo for myself a freelance web developer specialising in PHP/mysql. some feedback and directions please thanx the link: waynebrand.com/testimage2.html

06-03-2008, 10:24	#4 (permalink)
Paddy Grammar Deputy Join Date: May 2005 Location: Béal Feirste Posts: 1,143	I don't like this one either. It's gotten worse. Pete, yours is just as weak in my opinion. If it's not a rude question, why wayneBrand when you're a developer, not a designer? __________________ What's Rock Music?

06-03-2008, 10:29	#6 (permalink)
Paddy Grammar Deputy Join Date: May 2005 Location: Béal Feirste Posts: 1,143	Aimed at Wayne. Don't think I'm being mean – I'm not – but that was contemporary 10 years ago. The reflection is naff and the whole thing just looks a bit rushed, which it clearly was. __________________ What's Rock Music?

06-03-2008, 10:41	#10 (permalink)
Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,438	perhaps try something simple and consistent.. like the (very) rough attached Attached Thumbnails

06-03-2008, 10:52	#14 (permalink)
Alexanda European Champions 2008 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 2,387	waynebrand.com/testimage2.html that logo is cool as fuck what you all going on about? __________________ whats facebook?

06-03-2008, 10:07	#2 (permalink)
pontypete Designer/Developer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pontefract, West Yorkshire, UK Posts: 36	Bevel, Shadow = NO! Fonts = NO! Lines = Too small and Pointless Colours, A good combination! Sorry, But thats constructive critisism for you (without the constructive part) lol

06-03-2008, 10:15	#3 (permalink)
pontypete Designer/Developer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pontefract, West Yorkshire, UK Posts: 36	Heres something constructive for you, and you can have it, muggd.com/work/waynebrand.jpg (ill send .ai) if you need it, also tips are welcome lol

06-03-2008, 10:50	#11 (permalink)
Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,438	infact if you matched the shape of the W with the curves of the B that could look good.

06-03-2008, 10:51	#12 (permalink)
Stickman Dr. Lucien Sanchez Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: UK Posts: 5,638	WB makes me think Warner Bros.

06-03-2008, 11:08	#15 (permalink)
wayneBrand Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 17	waynebrand.com/testimage3.html (there is two on the page) I here what u were sayin Do Gooder but i want to use dem colours thanx for the fb peeps keep it coming... thanx

06-03-2008, 11:58	#16 (permalink)
Maerk Doodler. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 1,381	It's actually getting worse in spite of all the feedback. Impressive. __________________ sreski & scrapbook.sreski

06-03-2008, 12:16	#18 (permalink)
Coops Pops. Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 3,625	Is this a joke thread?

06-03-2008, 12:19	#19 (permalink)
Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,438	WB b

06-03-2008, 12:27	#20 (permalink)
wayneBrand Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 17	ok another take and i really like this one. waynebrand.com/testimage4.html

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