[blueberry]

Hi, im currently in the middle of setting up a new business. me and my business partner are having some problems picking a design for our brand.

Just some info about the company. we are mainly a print company specialising in print design, also do marketing and distribution & web design

il attached a few below. some feedback would be most appreciated.

Thank you in advance.

[Mandy Moo]

1 & 2 are quite nice.

[puzzle]

The splat looks like isomething ive seen before, nothing new there.

1 and 2 look a bit aggressive in my opinion. But I like 3. still trying to work out exactly what it is though. Don't think that matters though as long as its shape that people will associate with your company. Maybe simplify the colours and shading on 3 a bit.

Good Stuff

[seen.to]

A purple blueberry?

[Paddy]

I like the berry in 3. I'd change the text up a bit though, it's got no personality at the moment. Keep the word 'blueberry' all one colour and maybe use a custom wordmark.

I don't like the others.

[1der]

i like 3

[blueberry]

Originally Posted by seen.to

A purple blueberry?

haha yes.. its been genetically modified..


thanks for your comments ppl. il take all ur advice and come back with hopefully the finished product..

[Sergey.Hilobok]

number 2 - like it.

[emil]

splat's wrong. I like 3. it depends on what you actually do.
Quick suggestion. I have no idea if it's worth anything for your brand...
Anyway, you get the idea.

[Aijo]

Hey bud,

I'm not really 100% on any of them to be honest, the general concept of a blueberry isn't really very well carried out i'm afraid to say. Spend as much time as is needed on your main brand, time and care at this point will pay dividends further down the line.

If it were me, i'd got with a very striking blue color scheme with gradients. If you're gonna go 'Blueberry' then i think it has to be blue in the main.

I can't post URLs yet because this is my first post, but drop me an email if you like and i will help you out if i can.

Carl. ( carl@aijologodesign.com )

[ardoramor]

I think #3 is really good. For some reason, 1 and 2 do not look too friendly XD I guess it's all the thin lines? But #3 has a good design and also compact.

[corsicanu]

I like the fruit one. A little too complicated but the colors are great. Makes me think about eating it.

[Evangelion]

their looking fruity
your the boss and you can do what ever you want.
you are old enough to eat a chicken sandwich if you want to.

[jagungturbo]

number 3
but i think u should simplify the colors.
the font is okay!

[w00xer]

the berry is awesome. I'm just not sure that berries have leaves coming out of the fruit? Aren't the leaves on the bush only? And I think it will be better if you lower the text a bit. And the first two - I don't get. And what the others said. The berry has tooooo many colors. 10 colors on the fruit only? Come on... This reminds me of something steveb told me in another thread in this forum. "Try to work out a design in simple black&white first. When it looks attractive and balanced, you can then introduce some color - if you have to."

P.S. I am looking at the logos again. Text is toooooooo close to the logos. Especially the 1 and 2 versions.

[cMack]

if you play with #3 and maybe give it a bit of a stem before the leaves I think you could be on to something very nice

[Annie_G]

Joke!, although when I first saw #3 I did think of bowling ( a little ) I agree with the others, simplify #3. 1 and 2 look slightly like they could be associated with motorbikes

[Skinny]

I love the idea behind #3. It needs to be simplified though. I would also take out the leaves. It does need to be blue though (because it's a blueberry).

Here's a suggestion (reworked from a previous mock up I never sold).
I used a couple Bberries you could just use one.

Skinny

[OAweidah]

Number Three is really nice but you need to simplify it as well as make it some nice shades of blue, or at least a bit more blue than it is now. PurpleBerry would be a cool company name tho

[flamingmenudo]

I like 1 or 2