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Herr Kurm · 06-12-2007, 16:50

And if you cant see the positive L - neg P in no 2 you are a bunch of blind hedgehogs

in a bag.

The more feedback the better, ´d love specific feedback per version.

canglan · 07-12-2007, 02:04

I like #7, it's clean and straightforward.

steveb · 07-12-2007, 02:19

2 has the best logo, I reckon. It's the sort of bold clean design I always prefer. 7 isn't bad, but it's a bit "Made in Taiwan 1981". The sort of thing cheapskate CEOs draw with a ruler in 10 minutes for their company logo and think they're clever to save paying a graphic artist!
All the type is fucked except for 5 & 6, which are just bland. The ascenderless (cyrillic) K is especially horrible.
I know the brief said "sterile, mechanical and heartless", but you should rebel a bit! If you proffer something superb, the client will be delighted in any case! How many logo suggestions do you intend showing the client? Not more than three, I hope. Two good ones and one crap.

steveb · 07-12-2007, 03:35

Are these any good to help nudge the thought processes along a different route?

steveb · 07-12-2007, 03:57

Fonts: MonoAlphabet (Manfred Klein), Santiako (Uusimaa Type Foundry), Yanone Kaffeesazt Light, Share Tech Mono.

I reckon the last one might be the sort of thing you're after...

JonoMarshall · 07-12-2007, 04:30

From yours I'd say 5,6 and 7... but I really like the treatment of the letter form from SteveB as below?

Perhaps take it a little further and combine with 7? I suppose there's a danger of being a bit 80s.

Given your original description of your aims, perhaps 5 & 6 are your best bet?

Herr Kurm · 12-12-2007, 04:30

I loike the second symbol steve, Ill give it a spin. Regarding the type I will bastardize some poor fecker. Will probably show about 5-6 versions to the client -she is a really reasonable one, plus she is cute!

veckd · 15-12-2007, 01:23

7 is nice, im not really a fan of the others though.

yukaii · 13-01-2008, 10:50

i'd definitely go with type in #7. although the symbol could possibly still go for a stretch.

w00xer · 15-01-2008, 14:39

I like #2 the most. It's awesome. I like a logo with an idea + good looks. Maybe just the type. I am not good enough to criticize a professional's work.

kriando · 20-01-2008, 13:42

I like the number 2, of first image posted. I also like the one that has the "route" concept, it's "bold", but the line need a little more weight in it.

Herr Kurm · 24-01-2008, 05:38

If anyone´s iinterested it got sorted to this:

Based on a soviet-era puzzle game me and my client used to have. The circly thingie is intentionally abit flopped - you had to turn and rotate the puzzle itself.

steveb · 24-01-2008, 05:55

Is this bloody logo still not ready?!

Good thing you explained about the logo - I was trying to make it into and L and a P. I know how you love creating demanding typographic tests on your graphic work.

That said, I think it's fuckin' lovely!

datahound · 24-01-2008, 05:55

Class, perhaps that L should centre on the end of the downward spiral?

datahound · 24-01-2008, 05:56

Maybe not. Love it.

Herr Kurm · 24-01-2008, 06:04

Thanks guys.

Steve, if you look realllly carefully you might see a L and a P

steveb · 24-01-2008, 06:10

Just how much do you want to keep your kneecaps?

Herr Kurm · 24-01-2008, 10:20

I like my kneecaps very much, thank you.

emil · 24-01-2008, 11:07

logistik aportaal

Herr Kurm · 24-01-2008, 11:24

Hmm something went wrong, must have hit commandZ too many times I spose. Thanks for pointing it out emil

06-12-2007, 16:50	#1 (permalink)
Herr Kurm bloody peasant Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 2,689	logistics site logo v2 And if you cant see the positive L - neg P in no 2 you are a bunch of blind hedgehogs in a bag. The more feedback the better, ´d love specific feedback per version. __________________ refreshed portfolio

07-12-2007, 02:19	#3 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,970	2 has the best logo, I reckon. It's the sort of bold clean design I always prefer. 7 isn't bad, but it's a bit "Made in Taiwan 1981". The sort of thing cheapskate CEOs draw with a ruler in 10 minutes for their company logo and think they're clever to save paying a graphic artist! All the type is fucked except for 5 & 6, which are just bland. The ascenderless (cyrillic) K is especially horrible. I know the brief said "sterile, mechanical and heartless", but you should rebel a bit! If you proffer something superb, the client will be delighted in any case! How many logo suggestions do you intend showing the client? Not more than three, I hope. Two good ones and one crap. __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

07-12-2007, 03:35	#4 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,970	Are these any good to help nudge the thought processes along a different route? __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

07-12-2007, 03:57	#5 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,970	Fonts: MonoAlphabet (Manfred Klein), Santiako (Uusimaa Type Foundry), Yanone Kaffeesazt Light, Share Tech Mono. I reckon the last one might be the sort of thing you're after... __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

12-12-2007, 04:30	#7 (permalink)
Herr Kurm bloody peasant Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 2,689	I loike the second symbol steve, Ill give it a spin. Regarding the type I will bastardize some poor fecker. Will probably show about 5-6 versions to the client -she is a really reasonable one, plus she is cute! __________________ refreshed portfolio

07-12-2007, 02:04	#2 (permalink)
canglan Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 27	I like #7, it's clean and straightforward.

07-12-2007, 04:30	#6 (permalink)
JonoMarshall Day-Glo Jazz Monkey Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Shoreditch, London Posts: 1,129	From yours I'd say 5,6 and 7... but I really like the treatment of the letter form from SteveB as below? Perhaps take it a little further and combine with 7? I suppose there's a danger of being a bit 80s. Given your original description of your aims, perhaps 5 & 6 are your best bet?

15-12-2007, 01:23	#8 (permalink)
veckd www.veckd.com Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 39	7 is nice, im not really a fan of the others though.

13-01-2008, 10:50	#9 (permalink)
yukaii creative person Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: reading, uk Posts: 61	i'd definitely go with type in #7. although the symbol could possibly still go for a stretch.

15-01-2008, 14:39	#10 (permalink)
w00xer a deadly ninja Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 48	I like #2 the most. It's awesome. I like a logo with an idea + good looks. Maybe just the type. I am not good enough to criticize a professional's work.

20-01-2008, 13:42	#11 (permalink)
kriando Kriando Branding Design Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Portuguese, living in Brazil Posts: 9	I like the number 2, of first image posted. I also like the one that has the "route" concept, it's "bold", but the line need a little more weight in it.

24-01-2008, 05:38	#12 (permalink)
Herr Kurm bloody peasant Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 2,689	If anyone´s iinterested it got sorted to this: Based on a soviet-era puzzle game me and my client used to have. The circly thingie is intentionally abit flopped - you had to turn and rotate the puzzle itself. __________________ refreshed portfolio

24-01-2008, 05:55	#13 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,970	Is this bloody logo still not ready?! Good thing you explained about the logo - I was trying to make it into and L and a P. I know how you love creating demanding typographic tests on your graphic work. That said, I think it's fuckin' lovely! __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

24-01-2008, 05:55	#14 (permalink)
datahound Spare Parts Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Bracknell Forest Posts: 5,002	Class, perhaps that L should centre on the end of the downward spiral? __________________ poochmedia \| Computer Spare Parts \| Computer & Telephone Disposals

24-01-2008, 05:56	#15 (permalink)
datahound Spare Parts Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Bracknell Forest Posts: 5,002	Maybe not. Love it. __________________ poochmedia \| Computer Spare Parts \| Computer & Telephone Disposals

24-01-2008, 06:04	#16 (permalink)
Herr Kurm bloody peasant Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 2,689	Thanks guys. Steve, if you look realllly carefully you might see a L and a P __________________ refreshed portfolio

24-01-2008, 06:10	#17 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,970	Just how much do you want to keep your kneecaps? __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

24-01-2008, 10:20	#18 (permalink)
Herr Kurm bloody peasant Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 2,689	I like my kneecaps very much, thank you. __________________ refreshed portfolio

24-01-2008, 11:07	#19 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 7,045	logistik aportaal __________________ Tourism Q X R

24-01-2008, 11:24	#20 (permalink)
Herr Kurm bloody peasant Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 2,689	Hmm something went wrong, must have hit commandZ too many times I spose. Thanks for pointing it out emil __________________ refreshed portfolio

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