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Maerk · 11-01-2007, 16:13

Feels kind of confused, don't get why it needs the grey capsule or the ornate font, if you strip those back it starts feeling more logoish (I'm a technical word wizard I know

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Would just take that and make a million variations of colour and shapes and crops until one starts to feel right, now it just well yea feels confused, think it mainly needs simplifying, it has lots of colours (not always a bad thing of course) and lots of styles going on.

jantuan · 11-01-2007, 17:49

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Originally Posted by Maerk

Feels kind of confused, don't get why it needs the grey capsule or the ornate font

Would just take that and make a million variations of color and shapes and crops until one starts to feel right

Thanks for the comment!
About the colors and crops totally agree...it's just in it's first steps...just wanna see if people get that it's a building...your the first who didn't

About the ornament font...it gives elegance and luxury...well, kind of

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Maerk · 12-01-2007, 18:14

I did get that it was a building, but that was the only thing I didn't think that necessarily needed changing so I didn't mention it :P

Ummm why did you edit it out after only my C&C? More the merrier usually... And the guys here have lots of good ideas and suggestions usually.

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Maerk Doodler. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 1,381	Feels kind of confused, don't get why it needs the grey capsule or the ornate font, if you strip those back it starts feeling more logoish (I'm a technical word wizard I know ) Would just take that and make a million variations of colour and shapes and crops until one starts to feel right, now it just well yea feels confused, think it mainly needs simplifying, it has lots of colours (not always a bad thing of course) and lots of styles going on.

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Maerk Doodler. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 1,381	I did get that it was a building, but that was the only thing I didn't think that necessarily needed changing so I didn't mention it :P Ummm why did you edit it out after only my C&C? More the merrier usually... And the guys here have lots of good ideas and suggestions usually.

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