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studioinart · 21-09-2006, 14:02

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Hi Friends;

This is a logo for a company about Graphic Design, Web Design, Software Development... Please write your opnions...

Thanks for your critiques... : )

ron3d · 26-09-2006, 00:17

I like the paint splots, and the varying colors in the text. However, for me, the text is too much alike (same font, same size, etc.) To me, I think there should be a distinct difference between the word "studio" and the word "art", that goes beyond color choice. I think if I saw this logo, that the company behind it was not too creative. The logo isn't memoriable. Take "art" into a different font (or fonts, one for each letter), use a gradient in the text, stretch it, quash it, make it out of paint blotches, put it in 3d, just jazz it up!

As for the word studio, right now it looks too fun to be professional. Get rid of the itallics, tighten it up a bit, underline it, look for font that says YES, WE ARE PROFESSIONALS, something conservative, IMHO.

"In" is not an important word, it just links the two most important words. Don't give it the same status as the main two words. Tone it down a bit.

I get jazzed about logos, so don't mind me. This is just my two cents!

- Ronald
www.ron3d.com

studioinart · 27-09-2006, 10:04

ron3d thanks for your suggestions

what do you think now

Alexanda · 27-09-2006, 10:11

great that.

studioinart · 27-09-2006, 10:21

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Originally Posted by cantona

great that.

which one?

LogoMaid.com · 21-11-2006, 11:54

last one

dcypher.co.uk · 10-01-2007, 06:53

I really link the 3rd one - I think the type is much stronger here.

By the way, what font did you use for the 'Software Development' text?

Paul · 10-01-2007, 07:28

3rd wan

jantuan · 11-01-2007, 13:32

nice logos....preffer the third one...
But u could try to take off the effect of reflection at the bottom...

studioinart · 17-01-2007, 19:52

Thanks for great comments...

To be honest, i was planning to use 4th one, but as i see you liked 3rd one...

kwills · 19-01-2007, 07:27

What is the name of the font used for "Studio" in the 4th logo?

studioinart · 21-01-2007, 16:37

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Originally Posted by kwills

What is the name of the font used for "Studio" in the 4th logo?

Font name is: Script MT Bold

Wish i could remember where i've downloaded

emil · 22-01-2007, 01:44

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Originally Posted by cantona

great that.

seconded

cocknose · 22-01-2007, 02:46

Herr Kurm · 22-01-2007, 03:59

I just ate and had a couple of beers and a smoke so Im quite relaxed and peaceful and everything seems so friendly and life is brilliant and there are no worries. So here goes ....I just cant express how much I hate that web2.0 crap!

riat_sila · 22-01-2007, 07:08

But reflections make everything better.

logoorange · 22-01-2007, 12:50

This is the worst logo I have seen this year.

There are three types of logos: logotypes , logomarks & combined. Which one is this?

Maerk · 22-01-2007, 15:08

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Originally Posted by logoorange

This is the worst logo I have seen this year.

You obviously don't visit the interweb much heh.

Limbo · 22-01-2007, 16:25

This looks dated already. Way too trendy.

studioinart · 22-01-2007, 16:42

Quote:

Originally Posted by logoorange

This is the worst logo I have seen this year.

There are three types of logos: logotypes , logomarks & combined. Which one is this?

Thanks for your comment.

But to be honest, it would make me much more happier if you'd written how i could make it better as well. just writing "This is the worst logo I have seen this year" is not enough good comment!

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ron3d Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 213	I like the paint splots, and the varying colors in the text. However, for me, the text is too much alike (same font, same size, etc.) To me, I think there should be a distinct difference between the word "studio" and the word "art", that goes beyond color choice. I think if I saw this logo, that the company behind it was not too creative. The logo isn't memoriable. Take "art" into a different font (or fonts, one for each letter), use a gradient in the text, stretch it, quash it, make it out of paint blotches, put it in 3d, just jazz it up! As for the word studio, right now it looks too fun to be professional. Get rid of the itallics, tighten it up a bit, underline it, look for font that says YES, WE ARE PROFESSIONALS, something conservative, IMHO. "In" is not an important word, it just links the two most important words. Don't give it the same status as the main two words. Tone it down a bit. I get jazzed about logos, so don't mind me. This is just my two cents! - Ronald www.ron3d.com

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studioinart Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: manchester/England/UK/Earth Posts: 37	ron3d thanks for your suggestions what do you think now

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LogoMaid.com Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: EU Posts: 16	last one

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dcypher.co.uk Creative Solutions Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Bristol (UK) Posts: 133	I really link the 3rd one - I think the type is much stronger here. By the way, what font did you use for the 'Software Development' text?

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jantuan Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Global Citizen Posts: 15	nice logos....preffer the third one... But u could try to take off the effect of reflection at the bottom...

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studioinart Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: manchester/England/UK/Earth Posts: 37	Thanks for great comments... To be honest, i was planning to use 4th one, but as i see you liked 3rd one...

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kwills Jog on..... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Warrington, UK Posts: 466	What is the name of the font used for "Studio" in the 4th logo?

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Herr Kurm bloody peasant Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 2,649	I just ate and had a couple of beers and a smoke so Im quite relaxed and peaceful and everything seems so friendly and life is brilliant and there are no worries. So here goes ....I just cant express how much I hate that web2.0 crap!

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