Old 22-10-2005, 10:13   #1 (permalink)
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Logo crit - please

hi, could you give me some feedback on these please.

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Old 22-10-2005, 10:17   #2 (permalink)
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Makes it read like Max is greater then savings, which I reckon is a bad idea.

The middle one is awful, bin it.

I personally dont like the other typeface
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Old 22-10-2005, 10:24   #3 (permalink)
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Middle one is best bin the other two.
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Old 22-10-2005, 13:07   #4 (permalink)
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i would like the third one with the first one's xx's
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Old 22-10-2005, 13:14   #5 (permalink)
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Not keen on any to be honest.
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Old 22-10-2005, 13:45   #6 (permalink)
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I'd say, take the third one but increase the 'save' size a bit and give it a red color. Not inspiring, any are.
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Old 25-10-2005, 16:26   #7 (permalink)
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New design

increased the font size and made the colours a bit more zingy, what u think?
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Old 26-10-2005, 01:25   #8 (permalink)
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- reads: ma>>save

- the font is blah...

- you might have to think of a new concept.
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Old 26-10-2005, 15:29   #9 (permalink)
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Not that it can be controlled, but I'm not even crazy about the name. XX is just a bit too close to XXX, and I can't help thinking I won't be the only one who sees that. I would DEemphasize the XX's with that in mind.
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Old 26-10-2005, 16:53   #10 (permalink)
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Not that it can be controlled, but I'm not even crazy about the name. XX is just a bit too close to XXX, and I can't help thinking I won't be the only one who sees that. I would DEemphasize the XX's with that in mind.

Yeah good point, I don't like any of them.
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Old 27-10-2005, 16:16   #11 (permalink)
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some news logo for u

what u think of these?
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Old 27-10-2005, 16:24   #12 (permalink)
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And how will the white XX's look on a white background?
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Old 27-10-2005, 16:35   #13 (permalink)
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Click on the logo and see, for some reason the logo appear to have a black background until you open them
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Old 27-10-2005, 16:53   #14 (permalink)
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Can you increase the resolution a bit, they're quite grainy...

Sorry to be so picky/pushy, but it will help to see these logos at their highest resolution. Lose the orange and purple though. It looks shyte.
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Old 27-10-2005, 16:55   #15 (permalink)
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sorry, this is the only format i have at the moment, i dont like them, i still prefer the first few.
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Old 27-10-2005, 16:56   #16 (permalink)
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Up to you, then.
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Old 27-10-2005, 20:53   #17 (permalink)
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sorry, this is the only format i have at the moment, i dont like them, i still prefer the first few.

The first few were much better than this new set. If I had to choose, then I would go for the one from the first set, in the middle.
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