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luxbrand · 29-05-2008, 09:26

I have 3 proposals for the cover of an event guide I'm working on.
Can I get some feedback from you good folk on them please? Just to get the general feeling.

sub · 29-05-2008, 09:27

Coops · 29-05-2008, 09:31

Yup. Deffo 3...

Paddy · 29-05-2008, 09:34

Thirded.

atouck · 29-05-2008, 09:47

number 3

dpc036 · 29-05-2008, 09:52

3 without doubt

Do Gooder · 29-05-2008, 09:59

Three

Do Gooder · 29-05-2008, 10:01

is it me or is the 'S' in PARIS sitting high?

Paddy · 29-05-2008, 10:03

It is indeed. 2 pixels high in those preview images.

luxbrand · 29-05-2008, 10:12

Indeed it is guys. Well spotted. What a holy fucking shoutfest I'd have done if that got printed. Cheers.

Boss went for No.3 also. Nobody seems to like my curtains LOL

Do Gooder · 29-05-2008, 10:13

it's curtains for the curtains.

Do Gooder · 29-05-2008, 10:18

Hard to tell on the jpeg.. But might be worth looking at the dropshadow on the the red speach-bubble logo.

Simply to sort it so you can just about make out the white keyline across the top. imo anyway.

Could even play with a VERY slight photoshop emboss to make a 'sticker' edge. but watch out for it getting cheesey.

Coops · 29-05-2008, 10:39

Beef curtains.

sub · 29-05-2008, 10:40

Damn you, coops. Beat me to it.

Do Gooder · 29-05-2008, 10:43

had to google that. oh dear.

Coops · 29-05-2008, 10:44

Haha!

luxbrand · 29-05-2008, 10:45

That speech bubble is not getting many positive comments so I think I'm going to ditch it altogether from the cover. Thanks for the fresh pair of eyes and pointers, Do Gooder.

sub · 29-05-2008, 10:52

Set the text in a straight forward filled oval?

JonoMarshall · 29-05-2008, 10:54

Balloons/bubbles/round thingy-me-jigs don't look quite right to me... apart from not quite being recognisable as objects they're a bit too transparent IMO.

luxbrand · 29-05-2008, 11:31

Made a few changes to the 3rd one. I'm not sure if something is missing (I removed the red speech bubble) or if I'm staring at it too long.

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luxbrand Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Luxembourg Posts: 883	Cover selection I have 3 proposals for the cover of an event guide I'm working on. Can I get some feedback from you good folk on them please? Just to get the general feeling.

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Coops Pops. Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 3,686	Yup. Deffo 3...

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Paddy Grammar Deputy Join Date: May 2005 Location: Béal Feirste Posts: 1,158	It is indeed. 2 pixels high in those preview images. __________________ What's Rock Music?

29-05-2008, 10:12	#10 (permalink)
luxbrand Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Luxembourg Posts: 883	Indeed it is guys. Well spotted. What a holy fucking shoutfest I'd have done if that got printed. Cheers. Boss went for No.3 also. Nobody seems to like my curtains LOL Last edited by luxbrand : 01-06-2008 at 12:42.

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29-05-2008, 10:18	#12 (permalink)
Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,482	Hard to tell on the jpeg.. But might be worth looking at the dropshadow on the the red speach-bubble logo. Simply to sort it so you can just about make out the white keyline across the top. imo anyway. Could even play with a VERY slight photoshop emboss to make a 'sticker' edge. but watch out for it getting cheesey. __________________ personal --www.rogersartwork.com work --www.dogoodadvertising.com --www.goodacademy.org --www.reprinted.co.uk

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Coops Pops. Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 3,686	Beef curtains.

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Coops Pops. Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 3,686	Haha!

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luxbrand Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Luxembourg Posts: 883	That speech bubble is not getting many positive comments so I think I'm going to ditch it altogether from the cover. Thanks for the fresh pair of eyes and pointers, Do Gooder.

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sub Shitcasket™ Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Brighton Posts: 4,270	Set the text in a straight forward filled oval? __________________ Follow DT updates on Twitter: http://twitter.com/designerstalk

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JonoMarshall Day-Glo Jazz Monkey Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Shoreditch, London Posts: 1,129	Balloons/bubbles/round thingy-me-jigs don't look quite right to me... apart from not quite being recognisable as objects they're a bit too transparent IMO. __________________ Jon Marshall - Graphic Design

29-05-2008, 11:31	#20 (permalink)
luxbrand Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Luxembourg Posts: 883	Made a few changes to the 3rd one. I'm not sure if something is missing (I removed the red speech bubble) or if I'm staring at it too long. --------------

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