Old 12-12-2007, 09:23   #41 (permalink)
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I meant type was about all the same size, (except for the logo) and contrast between sizes could be improved.

As everything was a bit cluttered, it seemed that changing some types sizes would give some air and set everything right.

But ich speech not understood nicht clear no good zilch hiers.

sorry.
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Old 12-12-2007, 09:27   #42 (permalink)
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But then again, what do I know?

I don't know.

but i will try out a few of your musings sir.
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Old 12-12-2007, 09:30   #43 (permalink)
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I meant type was about all the same size, (except for the logo) and contrast between sizes could be improved.

As everything was a bit cluttered, it seemed that changing some types sizes would give some air and set everything right.

But ich speech not understood nicht clear no good zilch hiers.

sorry.

No probs man. I believe the word you were looking for in this instance was 'hierarchy'.
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Old 12-12-2007, 09:38   #44 (permalink)
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yeah well done.
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Old 12-12-2007, 10:34   #45 (permalink)
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Old 12-12-2007, 10:48   #46 (permalink)
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Old 12-12-2007, 10:54   #47 (permalink)
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tis my fav of the wonkies

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Old 12-12-2007, 10:55   #48 (permalink)
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Mmm, now let me see....

I like the address details on middle one best, deffo. But I'm not sure about cropping the logo. Not sure about the wonkyness either.

Edit: I'd straighten it all back up again, and put the address bottom left corner (as in number 2) and revert back to the logo positioning/size as previous (large at the top).
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Old 12-12-2007, 10:56   #49 (permalink)
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Old 12-12-2007, 11:20   #51 (permalink)
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Old 12-12-2007, 11:26   #52 (permalink)
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why do you need the second do good adverting?
just stick it in the address and leave logo at top.

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the logo is too wide / big.
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Old 12-12-2007, 11:27   #53 (permalink)
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We're getting there now flower!

Now it seems that the logo and strapline should be lined up with yer text. What d'yer reckon? Maybe should split the difference? So, a clear space of about 4/5mm all round the card, with the text lined up with the left of the logo/strap?

I'm a picky little fucker, me.
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Old 12-12-2007, 11:28   #54 (permalink)
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why do you need the second do good adverting?
just stick it in the address and leave logo at top.

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the logo is too wide / big.

Yeah like wot he sez an' all.
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Old 12-12-2007, 11:32   #55 (permalink)
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Instead of having "do good advertising" underneath the logo could you not just have "advertising", i'm not sure if that will work or not. It just seems a bit odd when you read the card and it says do good twice.
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Old 12-12-2007, 11:35   #56 (permalink)
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cheers chaps.

it has said 'do good advertising' under our logo since the start of the Co. ... think it was done to drum in the name a bit when we started out. Not considered it since. will have to revisit it eh.

when the logo was first done it had three varients:
- do good advertising
- advertising (as liam said!)
- www webaddress com

pure lazyness has had us only ever really use the first one.

food for fort. i will sit and stare at this tonight for a bit.
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Old 13-12-2007, 00:06   #57 (permalink)
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No probs man. I believe the word you were looking for in this instance was 'hierarchy'.

thanks mate

Writing in a foreign language is not easy, but I don't know any quality board in french, so I have to stick with you guys.
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Old 14-12-2007, 07:23   #59 (permalink)
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just about to head of for my christmas scran and beer.

not had much more than half an hour to look at this.. (babies with colds... desks.. installing phone lines..) but thought i would post this up.

gone two colour whooo

merry christmas
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