[MJ07]

I'd like to see it in muted colours - like the yellows and creams from the hotel photograph above.

Also I know its a work in progress, so Im just being picky, but it isnt centred.

[Aen]

Nice improvement. What I would do to make it really killer is to reduce the size of the logo. Maybe like 20% smaller and add some details to the arcantus leaves (veins and lines so it looks more sophisticated and grandeur). Don't print the background as it is. Instead ask the printer to make a plate of the background ornaments and UV Varnish it over the entire card (and the over logo as well). So the card has the ornaments as a raised layer of gloss. That would be the back of the right right? behind you can have the names and essential stuff.

The dimensions of the card looks weird. Try a standard 90x55 or a narrower 90x45. The one you posted is too squarish. "LITTLE COLLINS" needs tighter leading. The top and bottom ornaments should be identical and same size.

[vincentdg]

indeed, the B&W version looks better

[kaff]

Thanks guys for all the feedback. I've finished the project, so I'll post the different applications, hopefully later on today.

[microdesign]

whoo, i think i like the last one most!

[tokkilee]

the type still isn't right. it's not classy enough for the hotel and its too plain and boring

[shwizle]

Your latest update is the nicest. Although maybe make the type a little smaller? The spacing is almost too uniform for me...

[Kernel]

Originally Posted by Herr Kurm

black-gray-white combo makes everything look better

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