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Baba Ganoush · 16-11-2006, 04:41

sorry for all of you who have become fed up with me but i really appreciate the constructive critisism i have recieved before. so same again please...

d*d · 16-11-2006, 04:56

Thats a much better incorporation of the arrow, maybe try a version without the gradient and a different arrow head, also try a more readable font one that has less of a 'trying to be futuristic' feel to it

Baba Ganoush · 16-11-2006, 04:58

will do...

Baba Ganoush · 16-11-2006, 05:15

what about these???

Baba Ganoush · 16-11-2006, 05:47

Think i might have it with this one...

meandthat · 16-11-2006, 05:55

What's the company that you're doing it for? What do they do? 'Mechanical Services'? Mechanics? Engineers?

Baba Ganoush · 16-11-2006, 06:00

mechanical services are industrial pipe fitting and other things of that nature, my mate and his dad are starting up on their own..

check out your opions please and your opinions please ii for further insight.

stylin328 · 16-11-2006, 09:41

Works for me, what font(s) is that?

Baba Ganoush · 16-11-2006, 09:45

i'm not sure i'll have a look, i downloaded it yesterday

meandthat · 16-11-2006, 09:59

Not sure of the gradient or the subtelty of the shading. Depends on how you're gonna use it. Letterhead? Livery? Website?

Baba Ganoush · 16-11-2006, 10:08

just be letterheads, bus cards, compslips in this form.

Maybe an adaptation in black for helmets and Ivis jackets

cocknose · 16-11-2006, 10:10

remember to think tonally!!!!... how well will it stand up in black and white

Baba Ganoush · 16-11-2006, 10:15

i don't know if they are gunna go as far as personalised safety equipment, if they do i'll probably just have black fading into clear.

And for Stylin328 its GauFontLoveRocket on both counts.

malkmus25 · 16-11-2006, 15:45

i think its far too light. i liked the blue one but with new font

meandthat · 17-11-2006, 05:03

If it's to be used in numerous ways I'd experiment with no gradient at all. Solid colour all the way baby.

Baba Ganoush · 20-11-2006, 04:17

Cheers for that everyone, I too like the blue one...
it is one of three colour combinations I have forwarded.

As for the solid colour thing, i'm not sure about the arrow looks. I am still playing with it though so I may have an update soon.

Baba Ganoush · 22-11-2006, 05:07

it wasn't on so here it is...

pat · 22-11-2006, 14:35

sorry to piss on your parade, but it's horrible - doesn't work for me in the slightest, the arrow looks like word art, and the type is years out of date. Think cleaner, simpler, think how well it'd work if the logo was sued as the same size as it appears in that thumbnail, where I can't in anyway discern the 2nd line of text. I think a cleaner, flatter, more static approach would work better - there's too much moving about here, the arrow flying around, the italicised text. Why not explore representing pipe shapes/forms through 2D arrows, different heights etc. Feels really out of date.

oancea_adrian · 27-11-2006, 04:18

If you really want to keep that arrow try a little 3d and some gradients.
Sorry if this comment is late but I just joined

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Anyway this is my suggestion :

P.S. pls no comments on the jpg it only took like 10 minutes, not one of my finest .

d*d · 27-11-2006, 05:05

Quote:

Originally Posted by oancea_adrian

If you really want to keep that arrow try a little 3d and some gradients.

NO NO NO NO

16-11-2006, 04:41	#1 (permalink)
Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	your opinions please iii sorry for all of you who have become fed up with me but i really appreciate the constructive critisism i have recieved before. so same again please... Attached Thumbnails

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Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	what about these??? Attached Thumbnails

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Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	Think i might have it with this one... Attached Thumbnails

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cocknose Banned™ Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 3,485	remember to think tonally!!!!... how well will it stand up in black and white __________________ Facebook me!

22-11-2006, 05:07	#17 (permalink)
Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	it wasn't on so here it is... Attached Thumbnails

16-11-2006, 04:56	#2 (permalink)
d*d Moderator Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Bristol Posts: 3,299	Thats a much better incorporation of the arrow, maybe try a version without the gradient and a different arrow head, also try a more readable font one that has less of a 'trying to be futuristic' feel to it

16-11-2006, 04:58	#3 (permalink)
Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	will do...

16-11-2006, 05:55	#6 (permalink)
meandthat Posting work soon... Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: London Posts: 80	What's the company that you're doing it for? What do they do? 'Mechanical Services'? Mechanics? Engineers?

16-11-2006, 06:00	#7 (permalink)
Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	mechanical services are industrial pipe fitting and other things of that nature, my mate and his dad are starting up on their own.. check out your opions please and your opinions please ii for further insight.

16-11-2006, 09:41	#8 (permalink)
stylin328 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 332	Works for me, what font(s) is that?

16-11-2006, 09:45	#9 (permalink)
Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	i'm not sure i'll have a look, i downloaded it yesterday

16-11-2006, 09:59	#10 (permalink)
meandthat Posting work soon... Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: London Posts: 80	Not sure of the gradient or the subtelty of the shading. Depends on how you're gonna use it. Letterhead? Livery? Website?

16-11-2006, 10:08	#11 (permalink)
Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	just be letterheads, bus cards, compslips in this form. Maybe an adaptation in black for helmets and Ivis jackets

16-11-2006, 10:15	#13 (permalink)
Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	i don't know if they are gunna go as far as personalised safety equipment, if they do i'll probably just have black fading into clear. And for Stylin328 its GauFontLoveRocket on both counts.

16-11-2006, 15:45	#14 (permalink)
malkmus25 Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: DetRoit Posts: 20	i think its far too light. i liked the blue one but with new font

17-11-2006, 05:03	#15 (permalink)
meandthat Posting work soon... Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: London Posts: 80	If it's to be used in numerous ways I'd experiment with no gradient at all. Solid colour all the way baby.

20-11-2006, 04:17	#16 (permalink)
Baba Ganoush Is you calling me hugly? Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sheffield, England Posts: 89	Cheers for that everyone, I too like the blue one... it is one of three colour combinations I have forwarded. As for the solid colour thing, i'm not sure about the arrow looks. I am still playing with it though so I may have an update soon.

22-11-2006, 14:35	#18 (permalink)
pat jorge regula Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: B'ham/Leeds Posts: 4,860	sorry to piss on your parade, but it's horrible - doesn't work for me in the slightest, the arrow looks like word art, and the type is years out of date. Think cleaner, simpler, think how well it'd work if the logo was sued as the same size as it appears in that thumbnail, where I can't in anyway discern the 2nd line of text. I think a cleaner, flatter, more static approach would work better - there's too much moving about here, the arrow flying around, the italicised text. Why not explore representing pipe shapes/forms through 2D arrows, different heights etc. Feels really out of date. __________________

27-11-2006, 04:18	#19 (permalink)
oancea_adrian Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Bucharest Posts: 1	The arrow If you really want to keep that arrow try a little 3d and some gradients. Sorry if this comment is late but I just joined . Anyway this is my suggestion : P.S. pls no comments on the jpg it only took like 10 minutes, not one of my finest . Attached Thumbnails

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