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Evener · 19-09-2006, 10:14

I'm a student now,it's my homework.You can say everything about this one!
Give me your advise or what are you think about.

sub · 19-09-2006, 10:26

Position of the whole illustration needs to move up so 'metro' sits on the chest and not the belly.

superstoffe · 20-09-2006, 03:17

Way too big for my taste. Make a little bit smaller and then move it up as subcircle said.

ptgraphix · 20-09-2006, 20:15

I agree with both of the responses above me. Move the focus of the design upwards to the chest area and maybe try to minimalize the whole design.

deadgood · 21-09-2006, 11:30

Not keen on the design. but damn, thats one bright red t-shirt!! I thought 'metro' was in an ok position though.

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20-09-2006, 03:17	#3 (permalink)
superstoffe Super Individual Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Sydney / Stockholm Posts: 367	Way too big for my taste. Make a little bit smaller and then move it up as subcircle said.

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ptgraphix ClubEG6.com online now! Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Orange County, CA - USA Posts: 57	I agree with both of the responses above me. Move the focus of the design upwards to the chest area and maybe try to minimalize the whole design.

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deadgood kiss ma baaad self Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 63	Not keen on the design. but damn, thats one bright red t-shirt!! I thought 'metro' was in an ok position though.

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