please review my logo

saeeddameer
saeeddameer
hi

i'm still training and i design first logo ,so i need your feedback to improve my self

https://www.behance.net/gallery/40854285/Abraj-Almohandes-Logo

and Thank you

Comments

  • PointandStare
    PointandStare
    Watch it sonny Posts: 2,207
    AIUKlogotwolinesbrandapproved.jpg
  • Limbo
    Limbo
    Established Norm Posts: 27,389
    Contrived. Over-complex. Awkward. Applications are weak.

    So, avoid the obvious. Simplify it. Work on spacing/sizing and application.
  • handcraftedweb
    handcraftedweb
    thought leader Left coastPosts: 6,817
    I'd get rid of the outer swirl and make the core simpler/less dense.

    (I am not a logo designer)
  • josephfranklin166
    josephfranklin166
    website Design and Development Posts: 4
    It looks nice but you need to make it more simple. which could be easily identified by the peoples.
  • saeeddameer
    saeeddameer
    AIUKlogotwolinesbrandapproved.jpg

    there's a lot difference between my logo and amnesty logo and i explained how i got the idea
    i suggest on you to see my logo again

  • saeeddameer
    saeeddameer
    thanks guys for your feedback and time
    i will try to make it more simple in the coming works
  • IrvingNancy
    IrvingNancy
    I think there nothing to change here. Great logo!
  • steveb
    steveb
    BitterHusk Original™ Järvenpää FinlandPosts: 24,097 edited July 2016
    e3971135609785.56fd24bd2e2ea.jpgYou are not allowed to do things like that with the Roman alphabet. The authorities have been notified.
  • saeeddameer
    saeeddameer
    I think there nothing to change here. Great logo!

    Thank you very much, your comment inspired me

    Look Nice..But i am agree with josephfranklin166, You need to keep it more simple.

    Also you take a look of logo designed by EZ Rankings https://www.behance.net/gallery/35609685/Logo-Design-by-EZ-Rankings

    i will try to make it more simple.
    i will take a look
    thank you very much for you feedback and your time
  • EmmaClark
    EmmaClark
    CaliforniaPosts: 5
    It looks nice!!
  • saeeddameer
    saeeddameer
    EmmaClark wrote: »
    It looks nice!!

    Thank you so much

  • Klang
    Klang
    Ray fucking Purchase Posts: 17,252 edited August 2016
    It looks like a fucking abortion.
  • Zhero
    Zhero
    Registered User Posts: 28 edited August 2016
    It's too complex and it doesn't communicate me anything about the company. I don't understand the positive reactions, sorry, maybe it looks 'cool'.

    It might as well be for a company that sells warped toilet rolls with an "S" around it.
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