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Old 22-07-2003, 09:14   #8 (permalink)
Mr Fred
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1. left paragraph is way to wide. the line height could be increased

2. why not use green or pale red (grass/clay)

3. us open to big

4. the brand slazanger to me says outdoor, active, possibilities, hope. the blue strikes all of this off. blue to cold and reminds me of water.

5. not fussy on grey links

6. duotones are way to dark

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