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Old 06-06-2008, 08:39   #9 (permalink)
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Quotes look better but you still need to get rid of all the right alignment (front cover and address).

There are a few errors:

'I would like to information on leaving a gift in my will' doesn't make sense, for starters.

Also, 'Your support...' line at top - 'students' needs an apostrophe (after the 's' as it's plural possessive).

'No donation is too small'.

Double space between 'The' and 'Robert Gordon...'.

Hanging last word (pursue) on Michael's quote.
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