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Old 12-05-2008, 08:21   #13 (permalink)
Soup Of The Day
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I love your update, it looks really great.

One thing that kinda irked me was "contact us if you feel like it." As a general marketing rule; people like to be told what to do, for example, "Buy now!" or "reserve your copy today!" Rather than wording that so wishy-washy, be forceful:

"Check our portfolio to see how we have helped others, and be sure to contact us for your next project."

or just:

"Check our portfolio to see how we have helped others, and be sure to contact us."
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